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A Semblance of Emotion 046

Disaster averted... just! Yang's recklessness getting her into trouble, as expected.

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First of all, i love penny in this chapter, how excited she was to “commit crime” lol, yang was mad overconfident accepting drinks she hasnt seen prepared in front of her from scumbags. Is aura supposed to make someone resistant to drugs or something, if this drug was somehow abnormal or boosted it would explain why it took her off guard. She’s canonically a party girl right? Cant be the first time some asshole has gotten ideas, or at least SOMEONE has had to have warned her of the possibility. Was she showing off and wanted to look cool to her new friends?

Racenrise

Well damn. Yang and Penny might end up as bffs in this one. Will also be interesting to see how yang takes this close call relationship wise. Could see it going both ways from "well that was traumatizing, let's pump the brakes on intimacy" to "my knight in shining armor, take me now!". Just kinda more Yang brand aggressive, awkwardly adorable and unintentionally educational for Penny.

Zitronen tee

Another great chapter as always. I wonder how everything is gonna play out now that yang almost had something horrific to her. Hopefully tai and ruby show up at the hospital ( myabe oz too?). Yang may have acted like a dumbass but Tai and qrow keeping thier knowledge about raven from her made yang go to drastic measures to find out. Lowkey hoping Jaune chews tai out cuase of it. God I wish the chapters were longer

ch8246

My goodness that was a fantastic chapter and ugh Raven pisses me off like usual. Jaune was right she was the only pathetic one there hiding and running like a coward since she found out that Salem was immortal. Hopefully Yang takes this as a life lesson to practice as a certain mad auror from Harry Potter would say constant vigilance.

Cody


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