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Jaune x Emerald -- Desert Jewel

Vacuo was hot but that wasn’t even the worst of

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I do love that almost everyone focuses on Emeralds ass. My personal head canon is it's the only true contender of the bellabooty

lightweaver89

This is wonderful, I like the idea of war weary Jaune. And now he and Emerald have matching damage almost. More from this storyline would be fun, in fact any hypothetical season ten storylines from you would be amazing. But yes this specifically was very good. The characterization on em is spot on I think. And anything fleshing out vacuo is interesting

Daxxon Ford

Jaune spent years thinking about how a dark skinned girl treated him badly, that his preferences changed.

Fortunekuger

I really, really like this Jaune. It makes a lot of sense his personality would shift, but I also love that you showed how much stronger and more skilled he would naturally be. 10-20 years is what the creators speculate for his time there, that's AT LEAST a decade of training and fighting over his friends now.

Isaac

Holy hell, that was hot. You managed to tell a nive story here before we reached the end. The characterizations were on point before our boy shagged his former enemy. You also surprised me when Jaune went full Will Smith with Pyrrha's name.

SoulHook-41

Awesome, Jaune got to taste that delicious Mint Chocolate. And prove again the Legendary Arc Family Fertility! Love the pacing on this short story and the lemon was great. You write an excellent Jaune/Emerald ship. Also this is one of the first stories I've read post volume 9, very well done!

Luftritter

Incredible stuff, absolutely Incredible!

RandomBrit

This was really sweet. I liked the bit of others confronting Jaune for hanging with Emerald considering her past, it’s something i wish we saw more of in the show. Also the smut was hotter than Vacuo. I really liked how you characterized both Jaune and Emerald in this one. They felt in line with how i imagined they would interact in canon. All in all really sweet one shot

Baran Sevim


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