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Added 2019-01-11 16:57:30 +0000 UTCWell.. We finished part one of "Live in Dependence".
And I have weird feelings, I don't know , should I continue the second part (but I don't really want to work on it now), or start a new comic? I have some ideas
Also I would like to hear your "negative opinions" about the comic, I guess it came out a little empty Х)
Comments
The dialogue helps me to make SuddenlyTsumi on FA о:
F-R95
2019-01-12 23:48:00 +0000 UTCДелай то что тебе захочется, ты не должна рисовать рисовать то что тебе не нравится. По поводу того что получилось "немного пусто", я всегда считал что твои произведения имеют художественную ценность именно как рисунки, а не литературные произведения. Do what you want and it will be great! Just implement your ideas
Михаил Томаткин
2019-01-11 23:42:10 +0000 UTCYou can always come back to it later c:
ABYZZ WARRIOR
2019-01-11 20:43:54 +0000 UTCSince you asked for feedback, here goes: I liked the comic's art a lot, but I think the story came out a bit "empty" like you said. One thing I think you could do to make your comics better is ask someone to help you with the dialogue as far as English goes. We know you're not a native English speaker (I'm not one myself) and nobody expects you to write perfect English, but it would be nice to have someone review the text so there aren't so many mistakes :) Other than that, I think you should draw whatever makes you happy or you feel inspired to draw. Your art is amazing :)
Huskydog
2019-01-11 19:14:28 +0000 UTCHow about you set the second part on hold and do some short stuff. Only for one or two sites or so ?
Makoto
2019-01-11 17:40:28 +0000 UTC
