Shiny Gets Inked Script/Thumbnails

Here they are! A little later than I’d like, but thumbnails are pretty often the hardest part for me, so, oh well.

First of all I’m working on adjusting Lewis’s design a bit to look a little more cartoony and less uncanny valley. I’ve ditched the mustache, too, I just don’t like how it fits around a snout, it looks weird to me.

And here are the thumbs with the scripts! I was able to whittle things down to 8 pages after all, thankfully, so if I’m able to stick to my schedule of a page a week, this should be done in two months! Hopefully that is, in fact, possible.

(Ding dong)

Shiny: Uh... Hello? You’re open, right?

Lewis: whaddya want?

Shiny: well, uh, I drew this design...

Shiny: but, uh, it’s for somewhere sensitive...

L: all right. I’m about to put needle to skin.

S: cool... do you mind if I babble a little?

L: mm. Sure.

L: tell me why you want this tattoo.

S: ...it’s kinda personal.

L: well I am about to stare at your bare ass for 20 minutes.

(Bzzzzzz)

S: oof..... well. It’s to help me feel sexy.

S: partly it’s the fantasy of having a goofy, porn-Star style ass tattoo.

S: but I want something flamboyant and sparkly.

S: you know, as a reminder it’s okay to act, uh, gay.

L: no offense, but... you seem pretty okay with it.

S: ha, well. I still get self conscious about it. Especially during sex.

L: yeah. I still get that way, too.

S: ...oh.

S: wait... you do? But you’re so... butch.

L: yeah, well.

L: it’s partly a defense thing. When I was young I barely talked at all. Didn’t want to sound gay. Since I’m big, people assumed I was the strong silent type.

L: I just kept rolling with it until I forgot it was a pose.

S:god, it’s so frustrating! Like, I love gay voices! They’re so hot to me!

(Scoot scoot)

L: well I’m glad you appreciate it.

L: heh. (Thump thump)

S: oww

L: haha sorry. You’re almost done.

(Bah day dah dunnnn)

S: omggggg it’s perfecttt

S: Lewis you’re a genius

L: you should probably put the bandage on.

S: thank you it hurts a lot

S: tip’s in there, too.

L: yeah, so follow the care instructions and try not to irritate it.

S: ah, so no sex for a while, huh?

L: heh. Nah, you could probably get away with sex if you take it real slow and gentle.

S: ...oh.

L: you know, I can pretty much take a lunch break whenever-

S: YOU DONT SAY!

L: fffffuck, that’s good...

S: mnnn... you’re so gentle...

L: I’m not letting that cute tattoo go to waste...

(Fin)

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Obviously, this is subject to changes, but it’s a pretty solid template for how the whole comic will go, I think! Hopefully by next week I can throw together a lil banner for it too so these posts aren’t bare.