THE FIRST 110 PAGES OF DELTA GREEN THE CONSPIRACY
Added 2022-02-13 16:15:46 +0000 UTCWe're in the final edit of Delta Green: The Conspiracy. All art is done. It's in structural layout.
Here are the first 110 pages. We're looking for mistakes. Please read below carefully before trying your hand at it:
- We're looking for spelling or grammar mistakes, or mistakes of fact ONLY. (We already have enough ideas, thanks!)
- Please submit such errors to ACELL@ME.COM (do NOT post them here, because they will be lost!)
- Thanks!
Comments
"Nothing will change" is now "some things will change, where necessary". Right? Sounds good to me.
William Hobson
2022-02-17 14:17:08 +0000 UTCTOC whispering at a 320 page hardback and that's just the first one. Grinning like the Cheshire Cat already . . .
Stephen Jones
2022-02-15 15:34:16 +0000 UTCIn short, no. Sorry. Changes are as necessary (copyright) and not made lightly, or expansions on existing material and organization due to the books being split. If you have a problem with this please email shane@arcdream.com for a full refund. To say we understand this material and its needs better than you or anyone else outside the partnership is a vast understatement. We have ALWAYS overdelivered, and these books will be no different. Honestly, the level of entitlement evident in your post is...disturbing. Thanks, -D
Dennis Detwiller
2022-02-14 16:57:20 +0000 UTCI'm a bit confused with this to be honest. Six months ago you said "Rules, art, layout all updated to match the Delta Green RPG. Besides that, nothing will change – there's a reason they are the highest reviewed RPG products of all time!", so I assumed the text was being kept the same as much as possible. I understand the need to change some wording for copyright purposes as was done with monsters in the Handler's Guide but there seem to be some pretty substantial rewrites and new additions here. I quite like some of them like the section on Cells but its not what I was expecting and I know is something that a number of other people who backed the project were quite worried about potentially being the case. Could there be some clarification on how much is being changed going forward with the other books?
John
2022-02-14 10:16:17 +0000 UTC
