Glance of Paranoia (hiagb) (pencils)
Added 2018-05-30 22:58:48 +0000 UTCI wish I spent today a little more responsibly, but what's done is done. the second good boy for the week will have to be pushed to friday, but I did spend a good chunk of time doing a second pass of the writing on this page and feel very good about it, especially the third panel joke.
I can't wait to get to the greasy and violent parts of this whole final act. You're gonna have a gross time.
Comments
it was about the same, but I added in extra dialogue to make parts of it flow better between moment-to-moment, joke-to-joke
KC Green
2018-05-31 15:17:53 +0000 UTCThis has went from really good to scary good. Thanks KC.
Crotchy Donkles
2018-05-31 11:18:47 +0000 UTCi love this comic. & i love your writing kc, broad strokes and dialogue
jenny patron
2018-05-31 02:49:13 +0000 UTCCurious about the earlier draft on the dialogue but yeah, this had a great setup
Ami
2018-05-30 23:36:50 +0000 UTC
