[Spicy!π₯] Author's Choice: 'A Slice of Humble Pie' (Beckett Version)
Added 2024-04-18 12:30:01 +0000 UTC
[Alternate Text: A header image of pipped dollops of whipped cream that seem to have been made with a star-shaped tip. The little mounds are on a white baking sheet with some sprinkles scattered off to the side that are also white. The title is 'A Slice of Humble Pie' in thin, orange font.]
Hi Evergreen and Hickory Patrons! π²π
As usual, here is my note about our spicy writings. In the TFS, choice-based series, these scenes will eventually be more explicitly tailored by you, but until then, I'm excited to explore different dynamics in these writings! This B piece takes a more slice-of-life approach to spice with humor and growing dynamics before things heat up. ππ₯ I know some MCs are more experienced, while others might be experiencing their 'first time' with a RO(s) in Fernweh. Please keep this in mind! :D
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"β¦and then I called him, uhm, a bad boy?"
"A little run-of-the-mill."
At this point, you're mumbling into your cup of lukewarm green tea rather than holding a normal conversation with Reese, but his breezy critique receives a mock glare from you. He smiles cheekily, encouraging you to continue by remaining receptive. "What would you have said?" you ask before adopting a more elegant cadence, a little pretentious. "Stud? Slut?"
Your small grimace after saying the latter word earns Reese's smile softening into something else that's acutely knowing. Yes, dirty talk isn't going well, so you came to him. He knows it.
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Comments
OH THE WAY I SCREAMED AELSA OH THE WAY I SCREAMED. it was so cute and funny and warm and spicy. It's like that spicy chai latte taste when the weather is cold during cold weather, the nice and cute that still got that spiciness to it idk what I'm saying I hope I make sense but this was so cute I actually laughed out loud a couple of times. Dirty talk is hard, especially when its smth two characters are figuring out. Reese was such a little shit for what he did but it's so precious to know as well AND I SEE WHAT YOU FORESHADOWED TO US BEFORE, I REMEMBER YOU SAID WE'LL HAVE FEELS ABOUT THE LAST LINE!! It makes me even more emotional when Reese responds on a walkie talkie in Book 2 when MC searches for Bee & how R is the one to ask Bmancer!MC about Bee's whereabouts and being concerned. Gods it KILLS ME I LOVE THEM ALL SM Also live for Bee losing themselves in MC when things get heated up and there is a need for something a bit 'stronger' of a sensation to get their attention. Hot. very hot.
Renata G.
2024-04-18 21:01:58 +0000 UTCNOOOO!!! Do not call Beckett a slut as bedroom talk!!! I am screaming! Taken out in the first few sentences. Deceased. Beckett/MC is so soft but also fun. Beckett so perceptive that MC went a little bonkers trying to make this special. Confused but they got the spirit. Also, the last line. R definitely feels envy for the relationship MC/B have, nothing else. I am telling myself. I do not see anything else. DON'T TALK TO ME.
ckl
2024-04-18 16:55:29 +0000 UTCI would love that! They're both my favorites so that would be perfect for me lol
alex
2024-04-18 16:16:52 +0000 UTCIt makes me actually want like a poly version where you can be with both Reese and Beckett. Where your MC starts to realize you aren't just in love with Beckett but also Reese & and you and Beckett have a talk about adding someone else to the equation when Beckett starts to notice your feelings for Reese and the way Reese looks at you quite often. Because Beckett would definitely notice that, perhaps before you did π π
Lee
2024-04-18 15:40:24 +0000 UTCI loved it, I definitely loved the humor in it as wellπ€£. Reese and his shenanigans. I will say, you can definitely feel here the sadness pouring off of Reese for perhaps not being the one you're in love with & wanting to be that personπ.
Lee
2024-04-18 15:38:42 +0000 UTCββSo, he still let you have him after calling yourself 'sweet and creamy'? A true miracle."β I laughed out loud. In public. Questions were asked.
dasburnfrau
2024-04-18 13:48:19 +0000 UTC
