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TM004 - Which one do you prefer ?

Can't believe that I finish this one in time. I hope this will be a part of our next proper set. With this I can feel a bit relieved that you guys won't wait too long for the Calli set.

I am getting used to this pacing work although pressure is surely very high. To be honest, I want a bit of rest T.T

Anyway, It's midnight now so I'm going to sleep. Hope I can start to draw the background tomorrow and finish the proper set soon.

For now, please enjoy the cake ~

P/s: This piece is quality enough to make another proper set. If you like that idea please let me know. I will make one set with Calli's cake as proper set lol

- Hanada Yanochi

TM004 - Which one do you prefer ? TM004 - Which one do you prefer ?

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Thank you ! I will try to break sentences better in future work. I think I have used too much "and" lately. Maybe it has become a bad habit haha Anyway, thank you for your feedback. In general, I think you guys would love to have a set that highlights Calli's cake. I am having some fun ideas to make this better. Don't worry, since it's a proper set, there is no way I will make it cheap. Let's look forward to it. I'm back to my work then. Be right back in the next few days !

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

This is lovely, I would love to see this become a set too but I want you to take care of yourself above everything. You're working very hard, I don't want you to burn yourself out! If it helps, don't be afraid to do things like take a day of rest in the middle of sets to break up the work! Love the dialogue! I can hear her voice when she gets surprised :P Grammar stuff: mostly good. I think "Hey, don't just stand there, help me choose; which color do you prefer?" reads a little better with a comma and a semicolon instead of "and". A comma after detail in the next line. Maybe also a comma where she says "no, nothing" in the implied back and forth between her and us. The rest is good. You continue to do a good job with making the face so expressive and matched up to what's going on in the scenario. She's so cute! Calli may kill me but that butt is irresistible so I've made my peace. Thanks again for your hard work, I hope you rest well soon!

Toastywafflz

Of course! Keep up the good work and make sure to rest

Gabe

Thank you !

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

Ohhh, the reaction is better than I thought so I will make a poll to see if everyone wants it. It has been a year I guess, since the C.C set. But that set I didn't have enough time to make enough interactions so if I did it, it would be more complicated. Sure, I will rest a day after proper set Calli is done.

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

Okay, I am going to make a poll to ask everyone then.

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

Thank you, I will take some rest after the current Calli's proper set is done. I think I'm starting to figure out what I should do with quick work like this. Hope I can do it faster in the future.

花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada

Even as a small bonus set this start would be great, but as others said, please rest up.

Silver Oliver

Yes 100% make this a proper set!

Solo

Yes! I'd love to see you turn this into a proper illustration. I feel like its been a while since you made a set focusing on a girl's cake. And given the scenario, this would be perfect! Be sure to look after yourself! Please be careful

Ultra

Love the idea!

Gabe


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