Another round of re-writes and tweaking is done.
- I took slythytovepn's correction and corrected the imperial systems' measurements.
- Added more traits, something I want another look at.
- Rewritten some texts all around.
I'm basically happy with how it all looks for all of them I just want to make sure I'm not gonna write myself into a corner, or don't agree with how a character is written down the road.
If you have comments, corrections, feedback, I did something wrong, please let me know.