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Noyemi 2 Wip 4

Added 2024-12-26 18:31:46 +0000 UTC

Here's a previous shared wip, but I tried to improve the buildings as well as change a panel so it shows more of her face. I want to draw buildings as little as possible and stick to my strengths, and the start of the comic should really show noyemi's stress levels as much as possible.

Also, I'm trying out a different kind of thought bubble, I think it looks more interesting this way. Next thing is to improve the car, but let me know if it doesn't look too distracting like this. I'd rather not spend ages overworking myself to death and never finish this comic.

One more thing, her jacket and hair highlights will be added at the very end because I want it all to look consistent. Whats happened many times in the past is that I learn a new technique halfway through drawing a comic and then I have to decide if I want to go back to previous pages and implement it, or have half the comic look better than the rest.