So...how am I doing?
Added 2024-09-16 01:13:25 +0000 UTCHey Shandan folks, Just seeing if I could get a vibe check regarding the quality of the most recent chapters. The further toward the end of the book I get, the less edited it will be. So I'm sure there are some rough sections, but I'm kind of blind to them.
Anything stick out? Or do you just have any general thoughts you'd like to share? If not, no worries!
Comments
Definitely open to whatever you have to say. Did you notice a particular chapter where my prose began to stutter a bit, or is it a gradual thing?
Abraham Carson
2024-09-21 16:02:33 +0000 UTCI need to reread the last few chapters straight through to get a better feel for what I think. I think it’s been good but without deliberate introspection I tend to just experience things then move on. You did note that these later chapters are less edited, and that does show in the sentence flow of a number of the paragraphs, but that issue is usually fixed by just joining a couple of the sentences. A minor editing issue. I want to give a better answer, but also don’t want to leave you hanging, so this is an interim response.
Joseph Sikorski
2024-09-21 15:57:48 +0000 UTCWhichever you prefer.
Abraham Carson
2024-09-16 02:08:16 +0000 UTCI’m enjoying it! Haven’t noticed any issues at all really. Is there a place that you would prefer for us to point out any typos? Is the discord channel fine, or would you prefer for shandan chapter typos to be in the comment section?
ealize
2024-09-16 02:02:49 +0000 UTCHakuna matata
SilverBoy
2024-09-16 01:25:41 +0000 UTC
