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Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13

Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13 Are5's Daily Comic: House of Dreams Part 5 13

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Not a bad idea but an overhead shot of the guys and tween girls only..closeup of the other girls is a must

Shoji

In the final, I'll put in captions on who the guests are. The guy they're talking to is Josh, introduced in Watkins Cosmetics along with Miranda and Diana. He doesn't know anything about magic, dee was just boasting that she made the adults a non-issue.

Areg5

Shoji does kinda have a point here. Think we can get an overhead shot of the whole party as the chaos further devolves? Here we are getting into the niddy griddy.

Chompy

Areg…Sara has arrived! Now we get into it 😆 And are you meaning to tell me Ruthie has never seen pictures of her mom as a teen…didn’t Cindy have a prom pic on her computer , I’m surprised Ruthie wouldn’t remember that . And now with the bigger buggerboo…wait until Dana sees dear Aunt Nadia 😆 Also I need a caption menu or revamp of all the party people in this story..so many I forgot and who is that guy that’s chatting with Dee and miranda and why does he know about their magic

Shoji


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