Feedback thread for book 2
Added 2025-12-05 18:21:48 +0000 UTCSaw another author do this and I think I should do it too. I've had plenty of times where you all have given me feedback and it's improved the readability/flow fairly well.
This is where you tell me what you liked, what you didn't like, what you wish you saw or any questions that popped up that you think I didn't answer well enough. Or anything else that pops up.
I can't promise I'll respond to or answer all of them, what I will promise is that I'll read everything, like I've done with every comment so far.
Comments
I agree with this. Maybe end the book after this entire situation is over?
Thejasvi Prahlad
2025-12-07 13:48:08 +0000 UTCReally enjoy the story, only note would be that chapter 120 shouldn’t be the end of a book. Like if the idea is publish on Amazon or something, it’s the climax of a book but it’s also mid scene.
Eddie
2025-12-06 08:00:17 +0000 UTCLove the book, don’t love the cliffhangers
John Doe
2025-12-05 21:21:41 +0000 UTC
