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With Sprinkles 52

And another chapter is up!

https://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=32251&chapter=52

https://archiveofourown.org/works/54025354/chapters/166057375

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12446027/52/With-Sprinkles

Typing by: Abyssal Angel

Beta by: Abyssal Angel, Mist of Shadows

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I love this bit. " A blur of white resolved into a white haired woman with her hair in a bun. "I am Winter Schnee, Atlesian Military Specialist," she began and then paused. "Hold on, I've been told I'm less threatening when I'm not carrying my sword on me. Hold this for me, will you?" Winter turned and thrust her sword through the warden's chest, shattering her aura and sending the woman flying across the room to hang impaled like an insect on the wall. Everyone froze. "Where was I?" Winter asked. "Oh, right. My name is Winter Schnee, Atlesian Military Specialist, and I'm here to escort," she leaned back from the swipe of a guard's baton and kicked him into the ceiling, "the prisoners who were White Fang members," she didn't bother dodging the second guard's attack, her lazy backhand taking him down as if he'd been hit by a sledgehammer, "to transport to Menagerie as their sentences have been changed to banishment." The guard's body that had been briefly embedded in the ceiling fell to the floor with a loud thud in the sudden silence. "Are there any questions?" she asked politely. No one spoke. "Excellent," she said with a smile. "You have seven minutes to retrieve the personal effects of the prisoners being transferred." She pulled out a stop watch and clicked it. The guards fled as if a pack of beowolves were chasing them. "

Daniel Staub

Xander just told them about the afterlife's they'd be going to. Why would he drag a person out of a place they'd suffer just to let Winter beat on them some more? Would be better to make it so they can see where the person ended up to get an idea of why being a piece of shit isn't a good idea. Let it be broadcast by one of the dozen people who are always filming him and the world will have a very good example of why being like the Atlesian's gets you a one way ticket to hell.

Kasikan

While I get Winter was on the clock, especially when the mouse faunus was in dire straits, that prison warden got off awfully easy by Winter impaling her to the wall with a sword. Still...maybe Xander can resurrect her and let Winter take her time in making sure the warden is given a thorough demonstration about how she share her father's bigotry?

Alun Lewis


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