128 - Twilight
Added 2026-02-16 17:00:26 +0000 UTCComments
Still very nice horror Dunwich. Very nice horror which done well, I meant.
Argent Twig
2026-02-18 12:04:58 +0000 UTCThere is a classic syncrisis "comparison and contrast" with a commonplace humor moving to a Lovecraftian horror. The feeling of chill from theft of vitality is done rather well. I am not sure how the Apostate achieved a dominion from the city leaders/nobility.
Argent Twig
2026-02-18 08:42:30 +0000 UTCI think that if he knew his response would be "don't threaten me with a good time."
Sriad
2026-02-18 05:48:21 +0000 UTCI wonder what the apostate is up to with this ritual. Is he there to exploit the wound left from the breach? Or is this the "business in the north" he mentioned in an earlier chapter?
Finch
2026-02-16 19:32:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
H3lg3
2026-02-16 19:18:30 +0000 UTCCheap housing prices
Finch
2026-02-16 19:00:26 +0000 UTCMr. Apostate may be in for a wee bit of a surprise upon finding out who is lying in wait just behind door #1...
DB
2026-02-16 18:58:16 +0000 UTCWhy does anyone live in the north?
Connor Shearn
2026-02-16 18:56:59 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
bladepony games
2026-02-16 18:52:37 +0000 UTCI'm sure this is not the direction of the plot, but I think it would be quite interesting if the dragon princess were to die or be seriously injured here. I feel like it would force the Dragon King, who we have thus far only heard of third hand, into the story.
Zormor
2026-02-16 18:49:55 +0000 UTCTFTC
Undead Writer
2026-02-16 18:47:01 +0000 UTCThe Hierophant Masego!
Scott Schluter
2026-02-16 18:12:25 +0000 UTCJust another Tuesday for the grand city of Primarche.
Gwalmeich
2026-02-16 18:00:42 +0000 UTC
