46 - The Vault
Added 2025-08-08 16:00:09 +0000 UTCWhile the Codex of the Hollowed Sun had occupied their initial attention, the rest of the vault had plenty of lesser—if still astounding—treasures to sift through. Mae especially lost herself in the process of rummaging around in the storage cabinets, shelves, and drawers, oohing and aahing at each alchemical reagent she identified.
Jasper, meanwhile, had walked over to a pedestal with a glass container. He stared blankly at the three blocky shapes of silvery-blue material.
“Those are ingots of starmetal,” he said blandly.
Vivi’s attention drifted over. Sensing an opportunity to deliver long overdue payback, she walked up next to him. Eyes bored, she looked down at the bars of metal.
“Only small ones,” she pointed out.
He looked at her. Opened his mouth to reply. Closed it.
“Yeah. Just…small ones.”
“It makes for excellent silverware,” she commented, then turned and walked away.
She felt him staring at her back. “That was a joke, right? Hey, that was a joke, right?”
Rafael’s attention turned to Vivi as she approached.
“I have a situation I need help with.”
“A lesser demon would run screaming at such words,” Rafael replied. “I merely tremble, instead. How may this humble steward serve you, my lady?”
She eyed him. “I mentioned my apprentice, right?”
“You did.”
“She got into some trouble at Meridian. It’s why she was in Prismarche.”
He digested that, then said, “She fled across the entire continent? Not a small amount of trouble, then.”
“I don’t know the exact details, but no. In short, the Caldimore family got her expelled from the Institute…though maybe deservedly?” For all that Vivi knew Saffra had a good heart, it wasn’t outside the realm of possibility that she bore some guilt for what she’d been accused of. “But I doubt it. I think something more is going on. She allegedly attacked Isabella Caldimore, and was accused of other things too—I don’t know exactly what—but I suspect most if not all were fabricated. I have no proof.”
Rafael took the explanation in stride. “The Caldimores. If I made a list of five families to avoid, politically speaking, theirs would be on it. Perhaps at the top. I’ve heard no request, though. Does she have a bounty that needs clearing?”
“Nothing like that. I think, legally speaking, she was released with the expulsion. But someone she knew, a gold-rank adventurer, wasn’t happy when he heard what had happened, and—made a scene. He insulted the Duke and was thrown in a cell. He’s been imprisoned for six months, and I want him freed.”
Rafael hummed. “Duke Caldimore is not one to let slights slip past his family. A prickly man. And it sounds like he has the legal high ground. This could be difficult to resolve.” Strangely, the demon smiled. “Ah, the old days have returned in earnest. Though I’m surprised you didn’t free him yourself, Lady Vivisari, and leave me scrambling to pick up the pieces. Have you grown wiser in your time away? Or did you pity your steward for once?”
Vivi knew she was being teased, but justifiably so. Because it might have gone that way. Somewhat embarrassed, she admitted, “I went and checked on him. He was being treated well for a prisoner.” By the standards of this world, at least. “I might’ve taken things into my own hands if that hadn’t been the case.”
“I expect little else, however much I will advise you to act with moderation,” Rafael said, only seeming amused. “Now more than ever. You will not escape the repercussions of your actions in the same manner you once could. There are no remaining Cataclysms for the powers that be to justify a rogue element of your strength doing as she pleases.”
“I know,” Vivi said, though she knew she didn’t, not really. The scale of her problems was—too big to contextualize. They didn’t fit in her head. She was one of the most important people in the world now? That was much too ridiculous to be true.
“But yes. Duke Caldimore is famously touchy when it comes to his family’s honor,” Rafael said. “That said, he is a rational actor from what I’ve observed and the profile I’ve put together. He would not dig his heels in if the detriments grossly outweigh the benefits—pride or not. Thus, I believe there are a number of ways we could exert pressure. I hesitate to do so with either of our names, however, which complicates things. The time is not right to announce your return, or Vanguard’s, and my name would dredge up questions—why am I involved? A solution depends on how deep the insult offered was, or the nature of the grudge against your apprentice.”
“I don’t know the details. I’m still looking into it. But William and the Duke have interacted before. He was in the Wardens. He said something about one of his teammates not being healed after a serious injury, when the guild should’ve helped? Contractually? It upset enough people that Duke Caldimore met with him personally, though they didn’t come to a resolution.”
“The story jogs a memory,” Rafael said, frowning. “Hm. Regardless. I imagine a properly sufficient donation would solve this problem. There should be no need to rely on political weight, much less force. Coin is a panacea for many things. Upsetting, perhaps, rewarding the Caldimores fiscally, but nevertheless the most efficient solution.” He shrugged. “If this is unacceptable, and there is need for more direct approaches, remember: you borrow the name Keresi. They are honored to stand behind you, and their influence is not insignificant.”
“If you think a bribe is enough, let’s start there.” She hesitated. “But quickly, please?” She felt awkward asking him to rush when he was doing her a favor, but it wasn’t really a favor—it was his role as Vanguard’s steward. Still, she wasn’t used to demanding things of people. “I’m worried Saffra will want to see him, and then she’ll find out what happened. She’ll blame herself, and—” She sighed and waved a hand, not wanting to finish.
“It will be handled with the utmost expedience,” Rafael said coolly.
“Thank you. And speaking of Saffra, I need advice there too.”
Rafael raised an eyebrow.
“She doesn’t know who I am. I’m debating whether to tell her. The only reason I haven’t—” Beyond her natural awkwardness and not knowing how to approach that conversation, “—is because it’ll change how she sees me. I was thinking it’s better to get to know her without revealing it.”
She would have talked with Tilly about this, but she, of course, had no idea that Vivi was the legendary savior of the world either.
Rafael considered. “Children are not my specialty,” he said. “But I see nothing incorrect with your logic. Knowing that her master is the Sorceress would, indeed, drastically alter how she perceives you. Establishing a relationship beforehand could be beneficial.” He shrugged. “Equally so, it might be seen as deception. Regardless of the rationale or reasonability of hiding your title. Emotions are not logical; children are not; people are not.”
That wasn’t the most useful advice, but of course there was no cut-and-dried answer. She could only use her best judgment…and in this case, she really did think that getting to know Saffra for at least a few days, if not weeks, was smart. It set her somewhat at ease that Rafael didn’t disagree.
Vivi’s eyes drifted to Mae and Jasper. Mae was still rummaging through the vault and arranging reagents on a shelf. Jasper had been appropriated as an extra pair of hands, obediently acting the helper while slipping in obnoxious remarks wherever he could.
“Requests have been sent to the appropriate craftsmen guilds for your project,” Rafael said. “I should have answers by noon; urgency was specified.”
“All three?”
“Indeed. Leatherworker, woodworker, jewelcrafter, as you requested.”
“Perfect. Thank you.”
“Merely doing my duty, my lady.”
Glancing over and seeing Vivi and Rafael looking at her, Mae froze with a jar of golden liquid in hand. She hastily set it down and hurried over.
“I’m only organizing,” she said defensively. “I know I can’t just take what I want. It’s for if I need to find something quickly, for an important project. Best to be ready for that sort of thing.”
“I didn’t assume otherwise,” Vivi said. Jasper walked up too, and her eyes flicked to him. “Are you joining as well?” she asked.
“Joining?” he asked.
“Vanguard.”
He froze. His eyes flicked to Mae, then Rafael, who both seemed equally surprised.
“I’m invited?” he asked incredulously.
“If Mae is joining as an adventurer, not just as our alchemist, and you’re her teammate…?” Vivi could tell she’d asked something strange. “I don’t see why not.”
“Teammates holding membership in separate guilds isn’t unheard of, though is somewhat unusual,” Rafael said, interrupting smoothly. “However, from what I understand, you two have been on a team for eight years?”
“Nine,” Mae said.
“So this is more than a short-term arrangement. Thus I agree—the offer is not out of place.”
Both Jasper and Mae seemed disoriented, and Vivi supposed she’d dropped a bomb on them. Jasper clearly hadn’t expected to join Vanguard, despite how Mae had. And it would be a significant offer, Vivi realized. Joining the guild that had been exclusive to the Party of Heroes, though that trend had been broken by Mae first, would be shocking, even for someone as irreverent as Jasper. She’d just kind of assumed it would happen, seeing how he was Mae’s teammate.
She had her problems with Jasper, but she thought he was a good man at a fundamental level. The way he’d jumped to the Convoy’s defense proved it. So he seemed like a good fit for Vanguard.
“But I would advise an interview first, Lady Vivisari,” Rafael said. “As a minimum requirement. And they have a third teammate; it’s best to discuss the topic with him too, in advance.”
“Of course.” She should have checked with Rafael to begin with; she’d spoken without thinking. “You can handle that interview now, if you want. I was hoping I could work with Mae, and we don’t need…” She glanced at the ranger-adventurer. “A distraction.”
“I’ve never been a distraction in my life,” Jasper said.
Both Vivi and Mae stared at him.
“Maybe once,” he admitted. “Twice at the most.”
“He’s yours,” Vivi told Rafael. She looked at Mae. “Assuming you’re free.”
“Free? For…an alchemy project, you mean?” The excitement in her voice was plain.
“For alchemy,” she confirmed.
Rafael ushered away Jasper, who hesitated, glanced at Mae, shrugged, and followed the tall demon-steward.
“I don’t know how much Rafael told you,” Vivi continued, now alone with Mae, “but my time away left me with memory problems.” Mae seemed concerned but not surprised, so Rafael had probably brought it up. The two had been speaking with each other for who-knew-how-long before Vivi had teleported into the guildhall. “I want to make sure I understand the co-crafting process before I work with others. I have a project planned for my apprentice.”
“The beastkin girl,” Mae said. “Jasper mentioned her.” She frowned. “How she threw herself against a Titled-rank monster without a second thought. Can’t say I’m surprised,” she sighed. “She’s your apprentice. How many thousands of times did you do that, or Orion, or Axian, or any of you?” Her expression sank, no doubt remembering those friends who had died a century ago. She visibly pushed the mood away. “Is she invited to Vanguard too, if it’s opening its ranks? I doubt Jasper was some special exception. Let’s be serious.”
“If she’s interested,” Vivi said. “Maybe. I don’t have concrete plans yet. I haven’t even told her who I am. I was just talking with Rafael about that. It’ll be a…big revelation, I think, so maybe it’s better to wait until we know each other better.”
Mae looked thoughtful. “I can see that. Even I try to hide who I am sometimes, because of the assumptions people make, and it goes without saying I don’t have a thousandth the reputation that the Sorceress does.” She shook her head, then glanced over her shoulder at the pile of alchemy reagents. “Well, never mind that. I don’t have any good advice, I’ve never had an apprentice. What kind of potion were you thinking?”
“Any,” Vivi said. “I just want to jog my memory.” On second thought, though... “Saffra does need more level-appropriate potions. Or did you want to do work on something more involved?”
Mae squirmed around, eyes shiftily sliding sideways, as if embarrassed to admit it. “It has been a century since I’ve gotten my hands on mythic-grade reagents, Lady Vivisari. But of course, I’ll complete any project you ask of me.”
“How about both?” Vivi said, entertained by this woman’s obvious addiction. “Something exotic first, then lower-grade potions afterward.”
Mae bobbed her head eagerly. “I saw some Heartwood Ichor over there. That’s not too expensive, right?”
Utterly shameless. Vivi’s lips almost twitched in amusement. “I don’t have warp anchors set in the Western Kingdom, so not too much. It’d be tedious to get more.”
“Barely a few drops,” Mae promised, hurrying over to the hoard of reagents before Vivi could change her mind.
After collecting a few more supplies, they left the vault and wound through the guildhall to the alchemy lab.
On the way, Vivi’s eyes drifted to the quest board. A new mythic-tier quest, the second stage for Vanguard’s Restoration, hadn’t appeared. Would there even be a second stage? Logic seemed to dictate so, but apparently it would be some time before it appeared. Or maybe just an hour? Or some other hidden requirement? She would have to check regularly.
Inside the lab, Mae unloaded the collection of items onto a metal table and began plucking glassware off the shelves and moving equipment around.
“So,” the elf said. “Memory problems. I’m sorry to hear that.”
After a second of not having a clue how to respond, she replied, “It is what it is.”
“How serious? Not to pry. Just so I know.” She gestured around at the lab. “Trying to understand how to help.”
“It’s worse in some places, better in others. I remember you, the guild, the campaigns. Magic is no problem. I’ve had no issues casting. But some concepts are patchy, crafting especially. I don’t remember much of the collaborative process.”
She had real ranks in enchanting, rather than collaborative ranks, and had been given extensive knowledge on how to enchant items and set down persistent effects via Vivisari’s memories. But that was because enchanting was just an extension of magic; the other crafting disciplines hadn’t been so kind as to throw themselves into her mind.
Mae hummed. “Not surprised co-crafting was the first to go,” she said with a snort. “Not like you lost much. Skills handle most of the work.” She cleared her throat. “Not to make light of anything. Memory gaps are no fun, regardless of what they are or how serious. Sorry.”
“I’m bothered less than you think. There’s no need to walk on eggshells.”
While the discordant knowledge stemming from her transmigration could legitimately be called ‘memory problems’ in an abstract way, she didn’t have amnesia or some other unnerving condition. She supposed the whole ordeal—the transmigration—was something that still made her internally panic when she considered it more than superficially, but that wasn’t a ‘memory problem’.
“You may have to walk me through a few things,” Vivi said. “Or all of it.”
“That’s usually how it works,” Mae said, shrugging. “Not to say anything too obvious, but having ranks in a collaborative isn’t the same as spending a century studying and leveling the main skill.” She paused, then shook her head with amusement. “Then again, considering the sheer amount of skills you’ve gained from—I don’t even want to imagine how high your rank is—you’re head-and-shoulders a better assistant than even a seventieth-rank real alchemist.” Her eyes started to sparkle. “Oh, I’m going to be able to make so much more, now.” She turned back to the metal table and started excitedly arranging her equipment. “It’s been a hundred years since I made a [Earthstrider Elixir], or anything half as potent.”
[Earthstrider Elixir]? A top-tier speed potion. Vivi already had some in her inventory, but she couldn’t bring herself to disrupt Mae’s enthusiasm. Not when Vivi couldn’t come up with a potion she did need brewed, barring those weaker ones for Saffra. So she would let the alchemist decide what she wanted to experiment with.
“I don’t actually have any serious rank in a collaborative myself,” Mae said, “so I’m not sure how much I can talk you through anything. But I don’t think I’ll need to. From what I understand, the skills you’ve earned should handle almost all of it. That’s the whole point of a collaborative. So that adventurers who are busy bashing in monster skulls all day can come back and work with their guild’s craftsmen without years of training. You aren’t supposed to help with the whole process, just some of the steps, and boost the end result by being there.”
That was what Vivi had interpreted from poking through the various skills, but it was nice to have it confirmed.
“Here,” Mae said, handing her a mortar and pestle with a blue, chalk-like material inside. Azurestone, she thought she recognized? An [Inspect] confirmed the theory. “Start by crushing this into a fine powder, please.”
Comments
Those starmetal ingots? We don't know how large they are, but if they're "gold brick" size (400 troy oz) then ... well, a gold brick's current value is almost exactly $1,000,000, which would make a starmetal brick, at 1,000 times the price of gold, be worth (pinky to corner of mouth) ...
Matt Grayson
2025-08-29 13:52:22 +0000 UTC“Why do you think it’s called Starmetal?” “The metal mages call it an ‘isotope’. When you get enough of it in one place it makes a star. Destroys the city, so it’s not recommended.”
Matt Grayson
2025-08-24 17:53:29 +0000 UTCIt’s all about political precedent and not disrupting the powers that be. The world’s rulers are already going to have a mass panic when they discover a sapient nuke walking around, but if that nuke starts strong arming their way through everything they don’t like? Everything breaks. Using immense power to push forward your own agenda and ignore the law is tyrannical and will force the world to rally against you on principle, which will cause otherwise avoidable suffering to everyone. Like they said in a previous chapter, her existence is on the precipice of being another calamity purely because of the massive power imbalance she represents, and in terms of the people rallying around her? That’s called a revolution, and will end with a whole lot of people dead, which is once again, avoidable suffering. She will inevitably get her way, but solving her problems with careful political manoeuvring, while taking longer, will have a lot fewer long term consequences then jumping straight to violence.
Jayem
2025-08-21 16:35:12 +0000 UTCEarlier it was stated that her level trumped most anyone in social/political rankings. What happened to that? She is creeping around like a whipped dog. Afraid of her own shadow. Not finding this believable or enjoyable reading. She is a notional hero and has holidays in her honor statues of her in town squares etc. Who do you think the people would rally around? She has no reason to be tip toeing around this duke.
Edward Ravenbear
2025-08-21 05:45:25 +0000 UTCI like that this chapter addresses her avoided feelings about the transmigration. I've read a few stories that don't address that kind of thing and it annoys me.
Matthew Walker
2025-08-12 08:01:42 +0000 UTCArcaneCadence, this was the chapter you fully sold me on Vivi as a character. I obviously enjoyed the story and your writing or I wouldn't have joined the patreon. But this is the one where you presented a character who despite her human failings, such as the swooning over very weeby battle maids(my annoyance to anime tropes gave that two eye rolls out of two), she is not an idiot and hopefully not prone to picking up the idiot ball too many stories use to advance a plot. The part I specifically refer is to is her conversation with Rafael where she gives all that she knows about Safra, William, and the involved Caldimores to him and specifies while she doesn't believe Safra has any fault she doesn't know that to be the case. And is specifically keeping her mind open that Safra may hold some guilt is huge. That level of thought process by leaders specifically keeping blinders off is rare enough in the modern real world which is better about it and many eras in the past. So that Vivi is one of those people really increases respect for her more than I can probably state. As I said I already instead this story and had started to reread book one to answer your question about anything jarring in it. I did hit a couple places but life has kept me busy enough I forgot them so reading again to find them. On the topic of Safra I personally think that she is unlikely to hold blame, at least from our (modern readers') view, might hold some blame for some archaic or strange tradition/ law. I do think Vivi is keeping a much more balanced view of Safra than many readers who are convinced she is a perfect angel kitten, so I am again glad to see that. I hope she remembers that Safra is a teen and a young one at that; assuming beastkin has a similar development cycle to humans Safra is currently at one of the ages with large negative wisdom modifier to put it into game terms, and while I think the audience has bought fully into the orphan with the heart of gold schtick (and for that matter I hope it to be true for Safra), I hope Vivi keeps her eyes open with her. Also Rafael is now my favorite character with my intentional misconstruing of the line "children are not; people are not." I take that to mean he believes children are not people. So now Rafael is GOAT.
Lettered Wolf
2025-08-11 15:58:44 +0000 UTCPresumably Vivi doesn't know the apprenticeship screen revealed her (approximate) level?
Michael T
2025-08-10 22:04:18 +0000 UTCI don't understand what she thinks hiding her status from her pupil is accomplishing when it's going to be revealed sooner rather than later anyways. I thought Vivi was lazier than this, so it feels weird to me that she is going through all this effort to do something detrimental. Not to mention, her apprentice already has trust issues with authority figures. She was already burned once, why would you immeditaly turn around and deceive her after that?
Joseph (T3mmie)
2025-08-10 19:46:15 +0000 UTCNuclear weapons tend to get stashed in heavily guarded holes in the ground for their entire useful lives, so I can see why a person might not want to reveal themselves as a walking nuclear weapon.
Michael T
2025-08-10 18:30:50 +0000 UTCShe's a walking nuclear weapon. She could simply outright demand things and the government would theoretically have no choice but to go along as long as the demands are cheaper to fulfil than some critical cost level -- that's probably just shy of outright erasing a major city. It really is that simple.
Konstantin Parkhomenko
2025-08-10 02:51:11 +0000 UTCI think not telling her is a drastically bad idea, and obviously so. I share your annoyance. I’m enjoying the rest of it too much to stop, though.
Matt Grayson
2025-08-09 19:34:32 +0000 UTCYou mean “demonizing”, right? 😎 (It's a joke, see. Because she's a demon, so it would be ... never mind.)
Matt Grayson
2025-08-09 19:32:39 +0000 UTCVivi hasnt told Rafael abount count Caldimore on the train, right? He could be used as leverage to free William.
Gustav
2025-08-09 06:55:27 +0000 UTCI'm still greatly enjoying this story! I think to add more to my thoughts on OP protagonists, what this story does very well is humanising the MC. I think a story about an exceptional person in exceptional circumstances who is just trying to deal with the problems of existing is very engaging, at least to me. The whole, "yes i an the legendary hero, but I just want my new adopted catgirl to be happy." I find it really cute and heartwarming.
Andrew Serle
2025-08-09 02:37:52 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! I really love getting updates
deKu
2025-08-09 02:10:22 +0000 UTCExcellent consistency, for future reference, we need to avoid magical contamination during the processing. Vivi then proceeds to change the laws of reality in a localised area. Molecules can no longer bond to each other.
meatybyte
2025-08-09 02:02:14 +0000 UTCI think this is the point I drop the story. The pacing has stalled and we've seen a chunk of this chapter tied up in justifying not revealing who she is to her apprentice. It was already getting annoying, but we are establishing that as being an ongoing plot device for the foreseeable future. How many chapters will be bloated with back and forth conversations only to play out the melodrama of a hidden identity?
John Koor
2025-08-09 00:07:08 +0000 UTChmm it does raise some questions on the maturation rate of beastkin and the effect of a having a magical progression system baked in - not to mention medieval coded ethical discourse. on the flip side, she could have just done a runner (and I assume she's an orphan) - in a society with magic and long-lived races, looking 'child-like' could be insufficient to stop and get someone's backstory (since our MC has also been confused for a child).
nugitoBambino
2025-08-08 23:57:01 +0000 UTCWait a second… saffra is 13…. That’s a child, as in child child, not teen or young adult, CHILD Why is she level 400 and why was she living alone??? She gotta have SOME legal guardian What happend to the parents??
The one Sith to rule them all
2025-08-08 22:02:13 +0000 UTC“It makes for excellent silverware,” she commented, then turned and walked away. Choice! Way to pay him back!
Torisen
2025-08-08 20:36:03 +0000 UTCI think the chapter should be renamed Vanguards' Vault to avoid future discrepancies.
Torisen
2025-08-08 20:28:42 +0000 UTCYes, that would address the concerns of deceiving her, but if you ask a 13-year-old if they want to know a secret, they will say yes, whether it's good for them or not. Mature for their age or not, it's not realistic for them to be able to evaluate the pros and cons properly. Safra might be mature for her age in some ways, but as the situation with the slaves shows, she is still very naive in some ways and prone to making stupid decisions.
Kaloth
2025-08-08 19:17:00 +0000 UTCI know what you mean, but is it really weird? As far as she is concerned, they are all just fine back on earth, and she probably last interacted with them a few days ago at most so i doubt she would actually miss them yet. Also, whilst they were her guildmates, we don't know how close they were anyway.
Kaloth
2025-08-08 19:06:33 +0000 UTCTyftc!
Bobby
2025-08-08 19:05:48 +0000 UTCgood chappie
Elaine
2025-08-08 18:53:33 +0000 UTCThanks for the Chapter!
SleepyKooky
2025-08-08 18:51:11 +0000 UTCGrind this into a small powder please. Vivi Proceeds to use gravity magic to crush it into dust.
faite kellander
2025-08-08 18:50:14 +0000 UTCThank you for the new chapter!
WideWings
2025-08-08 18:49:04 +0000 UTCI find it kind of weird that Vivi doesn't seem to care that much about her old party members. I'm pretty sure she's barely even thought about them at all. The only reason we know their names is because of other people saying or thinking them. Does the fact that she's probably never going to see them again not bother her at all? It makes it seem like they weren't even friends, which is very strange.
bob cooper
2025-08-08 18:43:18 +0000 UTCStarmetal corkscrew.
Matt Grayson
2025-08-08 18:12:53 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Wensber
2025-08-08 18:07:32 +0000 UTCIf her status from Legend was from the first time she beat the game, and her level is 3(4?) hundred higher now in this incarnation, I’m guessing all of her co-op crafting skills are quite a bit higher too. These potions are about to be a-Mae-zing
Josh Cothran
2025-08-08 18:02:13 +0000 UTCShe will hands down make an anti aging potion for her not really but really boyfriend xD
Magnuss
2025-08-08 18:01:56 +0000 UTCI note that nobody has just suggesting asking Saffra if she really wants to know Vivi's real identity. Just let her know you can tell her, and introduce to people who can confirm the truth, but once she knows she can't un-know it, and is likely to be drawn into situations way out of her depth without being able to claim ignorance as a shield. She's very mature for a 13 year old, out of necessity. And it will address some of the concerns about deceiving her.
Richard Kenan
2025-08-08 17:16:09 +0000 UTCWell... our author has at least one small loophole here... because none of the characters mentioned so far have ever had an apprentice themselves, or at least that's what we can conclude. Raphael may have this knowledge, but it's a relatively specialized skill/boon, so at least it's not a direct logical flaw. However, it's hard to overlook from the reader's perspective. I'm therefore in favor of addressing this and not “forgetting” it.
Mario Schade
2025-08-08 17:16:07 +0000 UTCThis may not be a problem, but you now have a chapter named "Vault" (book 1 chapter 34) and a chapter named "The Vault".
Josh
2025-08-08 17:12:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Kasamuri
2025-08-08 17:06:14 +0000 UTCThe unwillingness of all parties to clear the air in relationships where trust is a matter of life and death is perplexing.
Matt Grayson
2025-08-08 17:03:18 +0000 UTCThat is a crazy ascii person. One arm up, one down, head at a jaunty angle! Took me a sec to parse it out really! Nice work!
Tom S
2025-08-08 16:57:47 +0000 UTCHonestly, I dont see her learning the truth at this point would have a negative impact at all. She is already thinking Vivi is a royal dragon to try and explain the things she has already seen Vivi do. And honesty is Important.
Aclys
2025-08-08 16:43:06 +0000 UTCShe'll only be able to hide her identity from Saffra for as long as it isn't public. As soon as word spreads - which, let's be reasonable, with her personality could be tomorrow - Saffra would have to lock herself in a room and never speak to anyone to somehow avoid hearing the news.
Westeller
2025-08-08 16:42:04 +0000 UTCHappy that Vivi didn't let Rafael find out about everything in the evening when the intel had already gone to different parties.
Jonatan
2025-08-08 16:41:48 +0000 UTCalso i need starmetal silverware.
Garrett Cannon
2025-08-08 16:38:14 +0000 UTCthis will be intetesting maybe collabs will test vivis skills for once and it wont be super easy.
Garrett Cannon
2025-08-08 16:37:57 +0000 UTC"So Jasper." *steeples fingers* "Where do you see yourself in five years?"
BottledChaos
2025-08-08 16:37:47 +0000 UTCVivi could just tell Saffra that she'll reveal her real identity at some arbitrary milestone in the future (like level 1000, some class upgrade, Titled, etc.). Rather than feeling lied to, Saffra would then feel like she'd earned the truth, and if the milestone is difficult enough it would offer plenty of time for them to become more familiar with each other. Saffra already suspects Vivi is something more than she's said so far, after all...
StSteve
2025-08-08 16:27:36 +0000 UTCThe others should definitely know about the apprentice message and how it must look from Saffras perspective… there are only a few reasonable conclusions.
Philreads2
2025-08-08 16:26:09 +0000 UTCVivi should enchant a set of star metal silverware for Jasper. A set that always comes back to him immediately so he can't sell it. And a durability enchant so he can't just melt it down.
Myriad
2025-08-08 16:24:18 +0000 UTCWhen the chapters are being released on a weekly schedule, some limits are going to have to be imposed on chapter length to maintain consistency in schedule. Kind of a consequence of being a web serial that wants to maintain an audience.
TUSF
2025-08-08 16:23:01 +0000 UTCI realize this is a web serial but I feel like word count is dictating the ending rather than finding a natural endpoint for each section. This wasn’t a good stopping point or even a cliffhanger, the story just abruptly stopped. If the chapters had “part 1” or something that might be more clear that we’re only getting a partial chapter.
Brian P.
2025-08-08 16:19:28 +0000 UTCRafael: Lord Caldimore, here are 10,000 crowns. William is very sorry for his remarks. May i take him off your hands good sir? Lord Caldimore: I was very insulted. What else can you offer me? Rafael: oh certainly sir... Vivisari, the Sorceress supreme has also authorized me to offer vaporization for your guild hall, your family home and estates, and your own August Person. Lord Caldimore: Actually I find my memory is spotty these days. I'm sure the crowns are quite sufficient. Good day sir!
Tom S
2025-08-08 16:15:56 +0000 UTCJasper! ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ!!
Matt Grayson
2025-08-08 16:14:22 +0000 UTCNice to see that the problem of letting Saffra know that she's Vivisari is on Vivi's mind, too.
Kalel
2025-08-08 16:11:01 +0000 UTCTftc!!
Ryan N
2025-08-08 16:01:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chappy :D
Reimu
2025-08-08 16:01:04 +0000 UTCFirst!
Laxen47
2025-08-08 16:00:31 +0000 UTCTftc
Chloe Syddall
2025-08-08 16:00:29 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter arcane
Bugou
2025-08-08 16:00:18 +0000 UTCTftc!
Rethyria
2025-08-08 16:00:14 +0000 UTC