Toph Heavy Part 3 - Preview Updated
Added 2022-05-14 22:03:03 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/s/54da6no24q3ld08/Toph%20Heavy%20Part%203%20Preview%20Again.rar?dl=0
Alright, so I mentioned in a now deleted post how unsatisfied I was with some aspects of the story. I decided to change something major, and now I feel like the story fits a lot better. I removed a page, so now this is 108 pages instead of 109, but it was a garbage page that did nothing and had nothing. It won't be missed.
The old file is now deleted, but not because I changed the story. I know when the link is posted on sites other than Patreon, and will delete the file (and edit the link if necessary) when that happens. Piracy can't be stopped, I realize that, but I am uncomfortable with the wider world getting a peak at something still in flux. The dialogue and what not are still subject to change. I may notice embarassing errors, or adjust the shape of word bubbles and those adjustments are between you and me.
Thank you for your continued support and I hope you enjoy the preview. This preview will be deleted June 7th.
