Toph Heavy Part 3 - Preview
Added 2022-05-07 06:27:03 +0000 UTC109 pages. All sketched out. Dialogue. Sound Effects. Available for only a month
EDIT: BIG UPDATE. Sorry for the third notification. I changed some dialogue and some sound effects. I also doubled the resolution.
Edit 2: link was going to old thing. Don't know why this is being so stubborn. Sorry again.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/z3cnmnbpge09l59/Toph%20Heavy%20Part%203%20Preview%20Hi%20Res.rar?dl=0
(edit: had to adjust a file, and it screwed up on dropbox, my bad, should be ok now)
Click on the link, then click on download in the upper left to get a .rar file that you can extract in to get the preview
I'm eager to hear what you all think, and I'm curious if you think I should announce this on twitter or not. Eitherway. I'm off to clean it up, add color, and make it super pretty.
On a side note, this is probably how I'm going to distribute stuff on Patreon from now on. A site that steals work from Patreon was brought to my attention, and I am going to try to combat that to offer value to those of you who actually pay. Once again, thank you so much, Toph Heavy Part 3 would not exist without you.
Comments
those are good suggestions. Thanks.
MG
2022-05-28 11:03:50 +0000 UTCthree suggestions: 1) use Elephant mandril or Saber-tooth Moose Lion instead of an elephant; while elephants are listed in avatar-verse, it seems more fitting to either use a the double-name creatures most animals seem to have, or at least something shown in the show/comics. 2) maybe toss in a dialogue line asking if toph actually did it with said creature 3) add in a Melon Lord reference; she uses her melons a lot and the current script does call them melons.
Wait
2022-05-28 03:43:06 +0000 UTCBro I canโt wait ๐ฅ๐ฅ
J c
2022-05-08 05:14:12 +0000 UTCWorth the wait! Oh, and the last two pages do sound interesting...
NKL
2022-05-07 20:03:46 +0000 UTCIโve got it now - thanks!
2022-05-07 07:43:48 +0000 UTCThe link in the second email wasn't working, but coming to Patron and clicking directly did the job.
TF Commando
2022-05-07 07:08:18 +0000 UTCThat's weird, I just recopied the link, it should work now.
MG
2022-05-07 06:41:54 +0000 UTC
