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Part 3 - Page 93b - Sketch

Added 2022-01-07 17:43:47 +0000 UTC

Major Edit: Woke up this morning, and as I said initially, I noticed some stuff that really bothered me. I spent the time I had today fixing those problems. I redrew a few panels and cleaned up some others. This crap is why I'm taking so long, there are just some days where I can't draw and it shows.

"It felt so good. I couldn't get enough. More. More! MORE!!"

"Please, no more"

And she left in a huff.

Not sure if the emaciated YCH characters read or not, but I'll do something more readable once the YCH stuff is decided.

I tried compact about 3 or 4 pages of stuff in to one panel to suggest a frantic flurry of activity between her and the YCH guests. Then the outside shot of the cave is going to be night, to day, to night, to suggest the passage of time.

I literally worked like 10 hours on this page. My eyes are blurry. I'll probably see stuff I need to fix when I wake up tomorrow.