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Zefaris Design Update Color Mockup

Subject to changes for story consistency, i.e skin tone, facial structure, etc.

Zefaris Design Update Color Mockup

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Completely agree on the face issues, what you said was pretty much exactly what I said to the artist. Pentacle is intentionally bulked up from the previous portrayal, as it was depicted as a near 1:1 copy of the 1847 Walker, and while it's based on that gun, the Walker fires decidedly realistic pistol loads... Pentacle, meanwhile is a monster gun that fires full rifle loads - it's analogous to a revolver in .45-70 or a .500 Bone Collector.

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Ahh, the problem with the face is the position of the eyes and the shape of the lips. The eyes are not in their natural position, the stage left eye is an inch away from the nose, and the stage right eye does not look eye shaped at all, sure, it’s not a real eye, but it is still shaped like a real eye, with working eye features and all. Then the lips are too thin, and shaped badly, comparing it to the last Zef drawing and there is a huge difference. The dress and mask look amazing, while the guns are well drawn, though I’m not sure pentacle is sized correctly, it’s as big as the shotgun, while her skin Tom is def wrong, she should be pale, not slightly tanned like here, she has been described as a marble statue.

Jessy


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