Lewd Comic
Added 2018-05-02 00:53:34 +0000 UTCAlmost forgot. It's storyboarded and I'll have the cover page out this month as well. If I can free some time hopefully we can have the first page too.
But yeah, I wanted to make sure we had Leo and Aeris' designs and body before I went ahead.
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well to be honest id be open to even higher levels myself if we got something out of it
Rick2tails
2018-05-02 20:59:17 +0000 UTCAgreed about softening up faces. Less lines = better. Also agreed about the $25 tier. Seems there should be more tangible benefits for that level of scratch.
Moopy
2018-05-02 08:16:47 +0000 UTCok you tease dont keep us waiting too long to see leo.if youve done some naked design work you know we want to see that
Rick2tails
2018-05-02 05:16:56 +0000 UTCSince we're on criticism and design--personally I think #346 and #351(Dat ass in the first Panel), is your best depictions of both Aeris and Leo. There are others, but we'd be going back a while. (Like #278) I'd like to see more of that. (And #328, need a proper beach episode) As for criticism, I've noticed that lately your style is adding a lot more lines around the face, most noticeably the eyes. I'd suggest, for this genre, pulling back a bit and softening things up. (everywhere, not just the face) At this rate I'm worried you're going to be drawing Sponge Bob freeze-frames :) Also, I think $25 is pretty steep for what we'd get. It'd be nice if there was more incentive in all the tiers. Like more personal input on the larger projects, or a raffle/drawing for that month's commission. Something along those lines. I'd still think $25 would be too much, maybe $20, but I'm a cheap ass, so.. That all being said. I really enjoy both of these images. The first one being my favorite. Not personally into futa, but I certainly appreciate your willingness to appeal to your fan's desires. It would be nice to know what you're willing to do, though. Keep it up.
BionicJuice
2018-05-02 02:02:01 +0000 UTCYep. It's cannon within itself.
Z
2018-05-02 01:20:02 +0000 UTCReally looking forward to seeing what you do with Leo, lewdly. Compared to Aeris who probably masturbates in private and is grumpy when she has to show off. I imagine Aeris occasionally has to deal with walking in on Leo gaming in the nude or just casually showing off for someone on his webcam, stroking a big erection for someone's entertainment and not getting why Aeris just whapped him one and bolted from the room.
Green
2018-05-02 01:03:48 +0000 UTCLooking forward to it. :3 Although in regards to the canon in this lewd version do you think these comics will be self-contained story wise or might it be a continuous comic here? For example if you drew a short comic of something like Aeris trying out breast expansion pills, that actually work, would that boosted bust size follow into the next comic of different theme?
Straw
2018-05-02 01:03:41 +0000 UTC
