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Storytime: Without Merit

Hey Little Buddies,

Thanks for your patience, I hope you all enjoy this cute little end of summer scout story. Let me know your thoughts in the comments.

Storytime: Without Merit

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*SPOILER* I will say I was kind of surprised that while he was mentioned a lot, Tristan didn't make an appearance. I mean Donald didn't either, but I'm not sure as much could have been done with him. Still though I thought having Kyle and Tristan's mother there was a nice addition.

ninetailedfox

Just getting around to writing this but once again, wonderful story. In particular I thought each stage of the regression was paced very well. I'm not as familiar with scouts but it seems like that's a good building block for your stories. Honestly I feel like I've learned a few things just through these :) I also have a critique that's a bit of a spoiler in my replies.

ninetailedfox


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