A little query
Added 2019-12-23 15:03:55 +0000 UTCHello guys, here again bothering with the surveys, although is not a real survey, since we go through chapter 6, I´m sure you have already a formed opinion of the novel and that’s why I wanted to leave this post open, so you can comment, what you think about the course that´s taking the novel in every way. I want to know what you think about the image quality, the poses on the sex scenes, the dialogues, the story, the characters, the mini-games, the videos the voices, anyway everything in general, I have told you many times, I think the feedback between us, is what helps the game to grow the most, so I wait all of your most sincere comments and suggestions, and of course tell me what you would like me to add or take off the novel. The only thing I ask is that if you see a similar comment or idea to another user, don´t post that again, just give it a like, so I can easily see what has more acceptance or how many of you think the same. From now and from the bottom of my heart, thank you for all your support and playing the game, love you. Hugs!
Comments
The artwork and scenes are terrific. My only request is that I'd like to see a lot more sexy clothing. I know, it may not be realistic, but I still would like it. Thongs.... rags with holes ... bikini armor ... see-thru sarongs ... penis jewelry ... naked slaves in the market ... very revealing bulges ... stuff like that. Also, if you ever want someone to help you clean up your English, I would be willing to help. You're good, but it seems like you are not a native English speaker.
uman
2020-01-09 15:47:56 +0000 UTCHi Joe, thanks for your comment, I like the suggestions, and I think I will apply several for the next chapter. As for the story of the mother, I have already thought a great story since the beginning of the novel, but I will incorporate it very gradually into the novel. And again thanks for your comment and suggestions. Hug
Luriel
2019-12-26 03:32:12 +0000 UTCI like the romance scenes, especially the incorporation of that new three way scene. It was a really good idea to have the option to pick the positions as well, I would say when you do that have the position be a bit different for whoever's the bottom or top. It will add even more replay value for new positions. I get having the option to romance more people while still pursuing on character and I'm loving it! I just think maybe we can still have the options at exploring some of the other boy's character and their stories a bit more like Jeff's instead of him being the main romantic partner. Like I feel Taylor has been left out of the plot a bit for the last few chapters despite him being a optional first sexual experience for Bennet. Id like to see more of Bennett's past in regards to his mother! What happend to her? That could be a very deep conversation with a romantic partner or Usher (Love the bonding moments with him). Lastly I REALLY would like to see some romance scenes with Usher as well as Klarion and Conrad (Since its apprant he'll be returning).
YoItsJoe
2019-12-25 17:08:50 +0000 UTCHi Myneghon, yes the issue of romance is a problem, because I want to give you the option that you choose with whom Bennett has romance, (I do not like games where only having one romance at a time such as Camp Buddy Mikkoukun, although I cannot deny that I love its content and the quality of the images, are super hot), but the problem that you choose romance, that the plot would fork too much and it would be almost impossible to bring coherence. I am seeing these days how to solve this problem. Hug
Luriel
2019-12-24 07:14:10 +0000 UTCHi Maelstrom, as for the main character's customizations, it will not be possible at the moment, since at the moment it would involve me to render all the images in a double way, for example if I give them the option of having a beard, all the images of the novel would have to have a beard, and in turn you see the same images without a beard, for those who so select it, which would be twice as many images for everything, for now it is impossible. On the side of the variety of potions, it is already thought for the next chapter, adding more variety, it is still difficult with large characters such as Aiden, Dragan, Amok and Tabra, because the poses are not prepared for characters of that size, but of Somehow I will solve it. Hug.
Luriel
2019-12-24 07:06:53 +0000 UTCHi Pilgrim, Yes the voices will be removed definitively. As for the translation and grammatical errors, as mentioned below I am in the process of solving it. And as for the issue of the plot, it is going to be a whole matter to solve it, days ago I am trying to tie all the ends and give it a solution, but I still can't think of anything 😔, but surely something is going to me to happen. As for the subject of the final point in the sentence, take it for granted. Hug
Luriel
2019-12-24 06:58:09 +0000 UTCHi Mark, yes the voices are going to be definitely removed. As for the grammatical mistakes and so on, I am seeing a change of translator, it is part of the new project that I have, which is to start putting together a group to move forward with all the best planned for the game, today I am really getting very fair With the times to perform all things the game requires. Hug
Luriel
2019-12-24 06:51:50 +0000 UTCHey! I love the game :) As far as image quality goes, I love it. There's very few m/m focused 3D games, much less ones that aren't all furry. One of my fav adult games is SpaceCorpsXXX, and I few the image renditioning on the same level as it, great work :) As far as sex scenes go, i think theyre very enjoyable. I actually tend to enjoy having the sounds on during them, and i think the animated ones are great. And I LOVE getting to pick the positions. Only suggestion I would make would be maybe to consider adding more fetishes. Cause sometimes the sex scenes feel a lil repetive. It has def gotten better as you've gone tho! The threesome scene, the kinky scene with bokkhar, a few risky/public scenes. (I'm also a kinky bastard tho so I may be an outlier). Really great overall tho. I love the dialogue a lot. When I play it, I try to always play every path I can find. The only issue I've really found is sometimes I'll choose a path but they'll reference something on a different path. (Ex: I chose to have a threesome with Dragan but when Jeff and I met the werewolf, they said Jeff had killed him, even tho I never saw that happen.) I def think it's jeff centric, but I actually don't think it's a problem, cause you have put in a bunch of other content. Overall one of my fav games! Really great work. I enjoy it a lot and I check for updates very regularly. :)
OopsI...DidItAgain
2019-12-24 06:30:00 +0000 UTCmy buddy-io dude, i think it's meant to be gay centric content my guy. I think this is one of the few games where m/f content is the side/optional one. I get that if you aren't gay it's no fun, but I think you just may be in the wrong section
OopsI...DidItAgain
2019-12-24 06:21:17 +0000 UTCYou went from optional gay content to forced gay shit. Fix it. Otherwise no one who dislikes that content who previously enjoyed the game will support you, and instead do the opposite.
FeeDHate
2019-12-24 04:25:52 +0000 UTCNew to this project and I like it for the most part. I noticed whether you follow Jeffrey or not, the story acts like you know his a werewolf. Is that just because a story line hasn't been created for not realizing his a werewolf? Also there's some grammar errors. Finally I'd recommend removing the voices, sound effects are great. But the voice recordings don't really fit in.
Mark
2019-12-24 02:31:04 +0000 UTCHola, Luriel, here is some feedback: - visual: great! - voicing: I prefer without (Do people really need to hear somebody to call “ah, ah, ah, f–ck”? Maybe yes, but I would not say this is something important and certainly not enriching the general quality) - story: you already know, I love it, but I would say, you have arrived to some „crossroad“, and it needs to be thought through well. As I hinted last night, it would be good to know, if this is going to be a simple f–king-story, Bennet with anybody around (= this certainly makes a lot of folks happy :-)), or if you want something more (= for more refined audience :-)). Somebody pointed that monogamy is overrated. Well maybe if one has anything other in mind than f—king, but if you want develop a relationship (and it seems Bennet has growing feelings with Jeffrey), than it seems rather implausible to me, that he would be able to have sex with anybody anytime... (Leaving apart the “medieval” setting = in reality, they would be all very soon executed for the sin of sodomy...). In my (perhaps not so humble) opinion, a good solution for having a lot of sex and also “romance” is (1) to postpone the romance to later stages of the story OR, perhaps better (2) to change the perspective and follow not only Bennet, but also other guys. In such a way, you can introduce a lot of sex with a lot of people (and dragons and whatever :-)), and leave Bennet to relax a little and have a more plausible kind of “fun” and romance as well :-) (As Myneghon suggested, it could be really a big mess with all the boys around...) - dialogs: sometimes too naive, sometimes slight errors in spelling or translations (I would personally enjoy also, if every sentence can finish with a dot “.” or other appropriate mark :-) - in the last update I have encountered two bugs, I will try to post it some other way
Pilgrim
2019-12-24 00:27:51 +0000 UTCI'm fairly new to your project but so far I liked most of the stuff in there. The art is fantastic, so is the variety. I did have a little bit of trouble understanding some of the dialogue but those don't affect the gameplay much. I do hope that maybe my MC can get some minor custom, like a beard, if possible, and more choices of Top / bottom with characters such as Amok and Dragou (yes I wanna top them big boys).
MaelstromGrim
2019-12-23 23:29:41 +0000 UTCI'm loving the game so far, if I could have anything I would wish for a bit of freedom in regards to who Bennett romances. Jeffery seems to be the default one that Bennett "loves" even though he can spend time with Borrkar, Taylor, Amok etc. You know I'm thirsty for a happy-ever-after with Big Green Boi Amok. 😍💚 As for the plot, I would recommend tying up loose ends before starting off in a new direction - unless you've already got a master plan to tie in Conrad, Borrkar, Tarik, Taylor and Jeffery's stories already, in which case well done! 👍
Myneghon
2019-12-23 23:29:05 +0000 UTCHi Amy first of all, thank you so much for taking the time to write the message, I really appreciate it. As for the story, I am currently looking for ways to reform things, just to make it more similar to the style of history you are commenting on. I know it was a mistake to get Conrad out of the scene and I'm sorry. But he'll come back ... As for the mini games, I tried the Android version or had no problems, as well as the videos of each sex scene. As for the animated sex scenes, it would be my dream, but among all the rendering of the images and the videos that I think don't give me the times to animate them. And on the side of the voices already several told me that they do not like them, according to the rest of the comments, I think I will remove them from the game. Again from the heart thanks for the comment, you can not imagine how much this kind of feeback helps me improve the game. Hug
Luriel
2019-12-23 20:42:11 +0000 UTCI really like what you've done so far and can't wait to see more. I like Jeff, but I'm not really into werewolf/furry type stuff. I like to see some sexy times with Usher. I also like the suggestion from the previous post for twins.
Goobly
2019-12-23 20:27:06 +0000 UTCthe image quality: Some of the best I've seen; the poses on the sex scenes: Really good, though I imagine a possible choice of the angle you view the scene would improve it. the dialogues: A little clunky here and there, but not too bad. the story: This is where I have the biggest issue. It feels kind of all over the place. First, the issue is with Conrad killing some dude and I still hate you have to sell him out to live because I wanted to date him instead of Jeff. Now we have this werewolf storyline. It'd be nice if there was a distinct storyline depending on who you choose to spend the most time with. the characters: Again, seriously miss Conrad, but the characters are good for the most part. the mini-games: Can't comment mostly because I play on Android, and the one mini game I could play wasn't clear for Android users how to do them. the videos I haven't noticed any, unless the cock stroking mini game counts; the voices are a little porn-like for my taste, but it's fine if I play without the sound and imagine my own. Animated sex scenes would be great if that was possible.
Amy Eklund
2019-12-23 17:22:15 +0000 UTC
