Vore day POV WIP

For some reason I thought I'd already commented xD But yeah, this is awesome! Love all the various perspectives and how many lovely predators get shown off. If I had to choose, I think I like the 1st end a little better, since I rather like the posing of all the giant ladies lounging around the path. It does make you wonder who'd be crazy enough to attempt that road though . . . x3

PrinnyDood

Crisis throat!

GizmoChinasa

Crisis top tier, so many runs trying to go for perfect and one person slips through, and then crisis swoops down and gets them, i love her so much

CrazyPowerRanger

hum it seems PAtreon is having some issues with PM at the moment. I Please chec your mail.

Karbo

that dude is standing there like.. NOPE

turboman500

The one with all the girls together in different poses is far, far more visually pleasing, imo. It gives a fantastic sense of scale, and gives everyone a lot more personality than all of them just laying down in a circle.

RoseRambles

Hello I just joined your Patreon. Very talented great work but is there a way to view the removed images? I understand Patreon is getting more strict and invasive with their rules.

toona Tic

The second one works for me because the internal is kind of like a punchline to the whole piece. Also, internals are supreme

Enigmatic Jester

I definitely prefer the second one, the harpy is a sweet touch. :)

Montezuma

I like the first one's group shot, but would love to see the small harpy tacked onto it.

Able 34 Bravo

I would love both and the alternate is amazing, but I like the last part of the first one a bit more.

DoubleAC

Definitely prefer the scattered more than the grouped, it adds a sense of how big Felarya is and how small you are compared to all of them. With the grouped picture you lose that sense of smallness looking at it, and I think that feeling of being prey is an effective mood for the holiday :)

Solace Chaostra

I prefer the alternative a bit more, yet I am thinking: " why not both?"

Scorching Warhammer

Thank you ! it was a really cool idea, very unique ;D

Karbo

I see XD

Karbo

I like option A better in general. But maybe more as a standalone piece? Option B is probably a good fit for vore day.

1998tg

The second one is what i like. This one gives Crisis the proper mawshot. This looks amazing and I don't want to see it again utnil it is done lol

Nick2802

Definitely prefer the first one, I love the different poses! Also there’s, uh, one big, round reason in particular to pick that image.

John Doe

Maybe. me personally though, the variety of poses is ironically what probably hurts that more for me ^_^; - because that'd work better as a setpiece pic specifically advertising the game; for a Vore Day pic, I'd say the focus being more on actually showing off the vore and the tummies is more fitting thematically.

MrMetroid

Maybe. me personally though, the whole "lovely variety of poses" part's ironically what probably hurts that more for me ^_^; - because that'd work better as a setpiece pic specifically advertising the game; for a Vore Day pic, I'd say the focus being more on actually showing off the vore and the tummies is more fitting thematically.

MrMetroid

I prefer the first one.

Verdant Range

I vastly prefer option 1. It has a significantly better sense of scale (something that is unfortunately lost on option 2), the poses are way better in option 1, and I like the small harpy being in the same frame as everybody else.

Tim Lockwood

Why is Crisis so cute!!! >^< 🥰

R. Joss

Oh this is going to be great! I do like option B with them all sprawling in a half-circle, reminds me of previous Vore Day pieces. Buuut option A is just so much better IMO; a lovely variety of poses, you get to have a nice sense of scale (they look properly giant spread out in the landscape), and the composition just works a lot better to me :D Plus it's a fun concept with the tower defense aspect!

Saftkeur

Definitely version b. It feels more ominous and also feels like a better ending. The standard version feels not finished with there suddenly being somebody new going down the oesophagus and you ask where rhey came from.

Signe (dcvfgb1234)

I'd go with the second one personally, though more 'cause the side-by-side views of the slightly bulging tums fits in with vore day a bit more IMHO ^_^

MrMetroid

I love the harpy especially so the second version is my favorite <3 Both look amazing though! The way you vary each mouth looks great

Pickle Surprise

I think I like the second one more, feels more natural (Also includes our little harpy!), though I honestly do enjoy both ^^

Oxurus

Incredible, but it has a flaw - needs more Vivian.

Osler

Any chance we could possibly do a raffle to throw cameos of patreon OCs in the Prey roles?

JS-Xeno

As good as the internal harpy one is, I like the end pose in initial post, just better. Good and well designed.

JS-Xeno

Absolutely love this idea!

Boggle08

I like the one with the inside of the small harpy’s belly the most.

Ketchup

Holy crap! I'm so excited my idea went ahead. Thank you so much Karbo, amazing work.

Feedfancier

Maybe I should give that tower defense game a try... XD I usually love me some internals but I think I like the first option more for this? I love the poses. Anyways I'll be happy no matter what you choose!

Cora9

This is a hard choice. I really like the poses and view of the first one but I also really enjoy the internals from the second one

LD

I really like the idea of a POV for the inside the small harpy. I think it would be cool to see how you handle a much tighter stomach interior on that.

808today

Second one looks cooler to me, the POV internal at the end is great

Oooo this fun, I think both or good but the second one does have more internals =P

Homer4hire247

I really like the first picture! It's so casual.

PG