The last treat
Added 2020-04-18 19:29:39 +0000 UTCWhat was once a busy, active and noisy street was now completely empty, The only audible activity were the loud, intermittent gurgles and groans coming from within the belly of the enormous giantess lying in the middle of the street, entirely naked.
You recognized her as a local schoolgirl bully, who apparently grew to a giant size for terrible and unexplained reasons, along with several of her gang who, according to rumors, were now rampaging through the city, catching and eating people alive !
The giant girl had come across the street, strolling with a big grin, and quickly proceeded to pick up and eat every single passerby she found, her throat gulping again and again, sending them one after another, thrashing within her large stomach. After the gruesome feast, she had lied in the middle of the deserted street, her belly apparently very full, if the thunderous belch she let out was of any indication.
From your hiding point you watched as the giantess was preparing to take a nap. However a clumsy gesture from you made a nearby metal pipe fall to the ground, with a terribly loud CLANG. The giantess' eyes opened and saw you. In one quick motion you were captured !
She didn't even talk to you. She just smiled dreamily with a sleepy and contented look on her face then lazily opened her imposing mouth. Another loud burp escaped from her throat as you were brought closer and closer.
Now staring at her large bright pink mouth and the dark gullet twitching in anticipation in the back, you fully realize you are going to be gobbled up by this giant girl ! As a small last treat, before she finally falls into slumber in order to digest the mass of dozens of squirming people trapped in her stomach, that you are just about to join. If only you could have stayed silent for a few more minutes...
Well that's the little scenario I had in my head when I started coloring :D Forgive the clumsy writing, English is not my prime language ! I wanted to try a Ganguro type of girl here, rather gaudy and vain. I thought it was fitting ^^
Comments
C'est vraiment cool ;)
Valky13111
2020-10-17 17:46:02 +0000 UTCWill we ever see the reverse POV of this? I remember there being a sketch of this scene from her perspective...
PG
2020-09-29 04:53:35 +0000 UTCThe most casual ending of a life ever. It makes zero difference to her
Nick2802
2020-09-24 02:17:33 +0000 UTCMerci ! :D
Karbo
2020-05-07 15:53:24 +0000 UTChehe probably yeah XD
Karbo
2020-05-07 15:53:13 +0000 UTCThis looks inviting! Comme d'habitude c'est du travail incomparables! J'adore!
Zachary Lavigne
2020-05-02 01:46:49 +0000 UTCHehe thank you, I'll try to do that more often :)
Karbo
2020-05-01 15:27:03 +0000 UTCEnglish may not be your first language, but that didn't stop you from writing a fantastic companion piece to an already great piece of artwork! I love short stories like this that add the context to really bring the scenario to life.
Toast Baron
2020-04-30 18:38:43 +0000 UTCwell who knows? I can tell she did quite an impression on people XD
Karbo
2020-04-23 16:12:01 +0000 UTChehe thank you ;D
Karbo
2020-04-23 16:11:28 +0000 UTCYup that's her :)
Karbo
2020-04-23 16:11:12 +0000 UTCThank you ! and yes I'll definitely try that again for pictures in the future :)
Karbo
2020-04-23 16:10:57 +0000 UTCThank you :)
Karbo
2020-04-22 22:25:41 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure i will draw one :D
Karbo
2020-04-22 22:25:32 +0000 UTCthanks XD
Karbo
2020-04-22 17:46:10 +0000 UTChaha XD
Karbo
2020-04-22 17:45:53 +0000 UTCXD
Vivians-number-1-fan
2020-04-22 00:33:10 +0000 UTCSo is this the punishment for breaking quarantine?
Vivians-number-1-fan
2020-04-22 00:33:03 +0000 UTChehe X3
Karbo
2020-04-22 00:23:30 +0000 UTCThank you :D
Karbo
2020-04-22 00:23:23 +0000 UTCj'ai fait ça comme ça, sans y penser mais je pense que je devrais essayer plus souvent XD
Karbo
2020-04-22 00:23:17 +0000 UTCThank you :D
Karbo
2020-04-22 00:22:45 +0000 UTCJe pense que je vais en faire une comme ça ^^
Karbo
2020-04-22 00:22:33 +0000 UTC;3
Karbo
2020-04-21 12:41:57 +0000 UTChehe thank you :D
Karbo
2020-04-21 12:41:48 +0000 UTCYour writing was adequate. I give you an A- :-) Although that might not mean anything to a European, so... 92%?
cousarmy0001
2020-04-20 08:31:16 +0000 UTCThere's something about this one that is on a completely different level than other similar pics. I think there's an element of realism here that's apart from what we normally see. The scenario you wrote definitely makes that part pop. You may be onto something brilliant for the next time you decide to do a completely vore focused comic even. Could be VERY interesting to see an expanded version of that scenario as a full comic. She looks like the kind that can get very... creative... with her meals.
turboman500
2020-04-20 03:32:42 +0000 UTCDamn that's hot. Wouldn't mind a comic with her!
McBiscuit
2020-04-19 17:32:31 +0000 UTCThis is great! Love the premise/design of the gaudy, vain schoolgirls mysteriously turned huge and voracious. :3 No cause to apologize dude: your English is pretty close to perfect, and your prose here was excellent, in my opinion. :D
PrinnyDood
2020-04-19 16:40:01 +0000 UTCHaha thanks, maybe I'll try that again some days :D and I'll definitely try to do more of these short stories as descriptions in order to set the mood for a picture ^^
Karbo
2020-04-19 15:34:44 +0000 UTCThank you :D
Karbo
2020-04-19 15:33:06 +0000 UTCIf this and the other things of yours I've read are any indication your English is on par with anyone else's. This is the girl from those reverse POV pictures you did, yeah? And damn, wouldn't I just know it, a girl like this that ends me!
Chinnsyn
2020-04-19 12:12:46 +0000 UTC;3
Karbo
2020-04-19 10:26:48 +0000 UTCThank you :D
Karbo
2020-04-19 10:26:42 +0000 UTChehe I'll try that then, it gives more context to a picture :D
Karbo
2020-04-19 09:24:29 +0000 UTCFantastic short story! Knowing the frustration the prey must've been feeling before being eaten, and the nonchalant nature of the pred makes the pic even better. Would love you to write some more of those in the future, and ganguros are perfect as vore preds imo. Great job!
Fizzisop
2020-04-19 08:33:46 +0000 UTCI really dig her tongue stud! Are you planning on coloring in the other pic of her as well? If so, might I suggest giving her a pierced belly button?
PG
2020-04-19 01:45:11 +0000 UTCThese scenarios are top notch. I'd love to read more.
YaltaNev
2020-04-19 01:25:49 +0000 UTCGood, nostril flaring !!
giantessvideo
2020-04-19 00:51:30 +0000 UTCSequel PLEASE. I NEED IT.
Owen
2020-04-19 00:11:14 +0000 UTCthis is one of your best and the accompanying story adds great context.
Nick2802
2020-04-19 00:09:42 +0000 UTCWow! Amazing long uvula, perfect for hold on it before beeing swallowed :P
2020-04-18 23:47:53 +0000 UTCI think your English is fine! I enjoyed the story and the picture. :D
PG
2020-04-18 23:03:45 +0000 UTCCool, le texte, pour accompagner :3
Taiki Sensei
2020-04-18 21:10:30 +0000 UTCJe sens le début d'une série de nouveau personnages qui sait. J'aurai voulu voir son corps entier à cet instant
gwadahunter2222
2020-04-18 21:02:23 +0000 UTCMate your writing is better than many people who have English as their first language, so as far as I'm concerned great job (9/10). I will say tho I am a bit biased because idk why but these types of girls in this situation are one of my favorite.
AdamH1212
2020-04-18 20:49:37 +0000 UTCNice little write-up, really helps set the mood!
Agora
2020-04-18 20:45:36 +0000 UTCYour writing in English is actually pretty okay! It was nice and shirt to the point =3 As for the picture the giantess has a really cute design, wouldn't mind being eaten by her X3
Homer4hire247
2020-04-18 20:07:27 +0000 UTCBro you should try yourself on writing vore stories more often :O (succubi at work writing was also excellent). I see a lot of talent there as well °__^
JohnboyX
2020-04-18 19:52:16 +0000 UTCYes story is very nice yes
Blue
2020-04-18 19:50:28 +0000 UTCLove it! I really like the story too <3
2020-04-18 19:39:13 +0000 UTCLove the story
Dovah
2020-04-18 19:38:54 +0000 UTCOh wow you should write these scenarios more often 😳
McKay
2020-04-18 19:37:34 +0000 UTC
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