Iridan's dance last page WIP
Added 2017-05-29 11:39:41 +0000 UTCHe is what I imagined for the last page of the comic :3 see it in flat color here : https://www.patreon.com/posts/iridans-magnetic-8868357
Yes I love to that kind of burp ending in a vore comic X3.
I'm hesitating between the two angles though. The first one is perhaps a little less readable but I like the sense of the vertigo it offers, the second one is easier to read but more classic. Which one do you prefer ? :3
Comments
Thanks ! :)
Karbo
2017-06-01 00:04:52 +0000 UTCI've said it before, but I just adore this sequence! :3 I think I like the first one best, since I'm a sucker for cool, vertigo-inducing angles and that sort of stuff.
PrinnyDood
2017-05-31 12:45:36 +0000 UTCI always love a good burp ending to vore too! :D I think I prefer the second one, but the first does fit well with the whole idea of the prey flying around that is present in the comic. Both are great though!
Triskelion
2017-05-30 19:32:25 +0000 UTCShes so happy =) Very cute (and hot) :3
2017-05-29 22:54:09 +0000 UTCSecond angle
Ehren
2017-05-29 19:59:45 +0000 UTCFirst one. Iridan has to be my favorite of all preds XD
Sleepingcats
2017-05-29 18:03:47 +0000 UTCSecond one
Konton454
2017-05-29 16:36:58 +0000 UTCO.0 ANOTHER PAGE! And is she sleeping!? How does control power while sleeping? Id hate fir them to be flung and fall to their deaths, much wast. I think First side gives a great perspective of the privileged flying around her. But PAGE two feels more natural for the comic and make better phone background >.>. Im rooting for #2 but Either way both will look nice.
Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)
2017-05-29 16:33:55 +0000 UTCI would go with the first one for the big picture but use the smaller panel from the second one together. I think that would look the best.
2017-05-29 15:50:36 +0000 UTCGo for something novel and experiment. The first one
Doc
2017-05-29 15:20:10 +0000 UTCI would say if the comic used more angles like the first one to give of sense of vertigo, then you should have gone with that, but since there really only one other time that sort of angle does happen(final panel page 3), I'm gonna say go with the second one since that feels more consistent with the panels.
Homer4hire247
2017-05-29 13:36:01 +0000 UTCThe first one
Signe (dcvfgb1234)
2017-05-29 13:12:20 +0000 UTCThe first one.
Maplesburg Publishing
2017-05-29 13:10:35 +0000 UTCFirst one is interesting, but I think the second one fits the style of the rest of the comic better :)
2017-05-29 13:06:18 +0000 UTCThe second on!
turboman500
2017-05-29 13:03:27 +0000 UTCThe second one definitely :-) !!!
JohnboyX
2017-05-29 11:44:56 +0000 UTC
