About critiques

haha alright XP

Karbo

Just to be that guy, is there actual naga's in the world to reference the anatomy from? Its artist freedom not hyper realism. You can draw a chicken with dragon wings and argue they dont know how to draw a chicken, but thats me being THAT guy and we all hate that guy.

Marinka

Probably, I will always say this, but you ... know very little of the internal anatomy of xD The structure of the nasopharynx, epiglottis, trachea ... Damn, I thought you'd learn these things in the first year from the beginning of your creativity! =)

While I may no longer be a Patron, and thus don't have access to your wips and lineart so that you can fix things before it reaches the finished phase, I will endeavor to give you critiques when a piece of yours really hits me. Keep your eyes open for Lumfan247 on DA Karbo, I'm starting my fledgling attempts at being a decent art critique at your request. :P

Moosey

Oh don't force it, but just if you see something at one point, don't hesitate ;)

Karbo

Thanks ! :3

Karbo

Yeah no problem =)

Homer4hire247

oh good catch ! I see what is wrong here indeed ^^

Karbo

oh I see what you mean but still, sometimes there are anatomy errors that just looks off regardless of the style I think :3

Karbo

Okay its really a minor thing with the Centaur pic. I noticed after using the pic as a background on my phone (so I'm still really liking it :3). The left front leg (The top most), the back of the leg were it supposed to curve with the joint seems off. It seems were the front of the knee bends and were the back is bending don't match up. That's really all I noticed drawing wise. Also I'll try to do this sooner to when you release the WIPs from now on. Thanks again though.

Homer4hire247

Well for this one it's a bit difficult since the stomach panel is on top of a complex background ^^; ( with the stained glass and all ) And without that panel I feel the picture would lose some of its meaning ^^;

Karbo

oh sure go ahead ^^

Karbo

Yes for this month I want to have some poses up and at least finish one image :)

Karbo

Ah okay then one more question then. Can I make a slight critique on the last Patreon sketches or is that to far along?

Homer4hire247

Ah more on the WIPs since it's more useful to me but I don't mind on finished pictures as well :)

Karbo

haha ok XP

Karbo

By the way, whats the status of the Menyssan novel? And will you put out more teaser pics or wait until the full piece is finished? :)

Well, it's honestly kinda hard to give any kind of helpful critique when one is as art-illiterate as I am, and I often hesitate to say something like 'hmm, her head looks kinda weird, but I have no idea why or how to fix it'. xP But I suppose they say there's real merit to getting the 'clueless' perspective, so if I see something that looks wrong somewhere, I'll try to remember to point it out. Though I'm surely not the best at spotting that sort of thing in the first place.

PrinnyDood

Well quick question then would you like a critiques more on you WIPS to help the picture as it beenI g developed or just let you do your thing and have a critique on the final done pic?

Homer4hire247

Not really a critique as much as a suggestion, but would you consider making 2 different versions of art where (for example the most recent post of Navi), when 1 version is the normal x-ray version, but the second is just the character with no x-ray.

Chaotic Sloth

Anatomically it's hard to critique manga/anime body proportions because it's made to be an exaggerated style of real life proportions.

Easy eyy

I agree, with Lucas. Not much to say and I'm pretty picky about proportions and perspective. I'll start giving more feed back.😎 Keep up the great work!

La seule critique que j'ai à te faire, c'est que sur le dessin avec Angus et Crisis, t'avais oublié le brassard rouge, mais t'as rattrapé ça dans le dernier dessin d'Angus ! ^^ A part ça, niveau critiques, j'ai pas grand-chose à dire. En même temps, j'suis bon public ! x)

Taiki Sensei