Naughty trio WIP ( Flat shading done )
Added 2016-01-30 16:15:53 +0000 UTCWell here is the new draft of the trio comic :)
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well it shouldn't be too far away then :3
Karbo
2016-02-02 17:05:57 +0000 UTCah no, no complaints at all it's just to stay consistent with all others panels ^^
Karbo
2016-02-02 15:14:54 +0000 UTC;3
Karbo
2016-02-02 12:38:57 +0000 UTCthat's what you call a harsh wake up yeah XD
Karbo
2016-02-02 12:38:45 +0000 UTCto be honest it wasn't but that's a nice link to make XP
Karbo
2016-02-02 12:38:16 +0000 UTChehe thank you, I'm glad I got Malika's tongue right ;D
Karbo
2016-02-02 12:37:38 +0000 UTCI was blown away by this yet again, and I must say, the more hybridized approach to Malika's tongue came out remarkably well. Viewing this has certainly made me want to explore more of Malika's ravenous side for sure, though that'll have to wait for now. I love the whole comic though - from the between breast shots, to the tongue flick Vivian uses to toss Mel the victim from her mouth. I also agree with Prinny, about how cool it was to see her mez abilities right off the bat, and just how strong they are.
turboman500
2016-02-01 16:14:12 +0000 UTCHey, I just realized that the last girl that Melany swallows looks a lot like the one in "Dangling above the abyss", an incredible picture that I suggested to Karbo about a year ago. <a href="http://karbo.deviantart.com/art/Dangling-above-the-abyss-497606033" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://karbo.deviantart.com/art/Dangling-above-the-abyss-497606033</a> That's also supposedly Melany's mouth. I guess my personal head-canon now is that since we don't get a explicit shot of the girl in Melany's mouth on page 10, this is what happened directly before her trip to her belly. I don't suspect this was your original intention, Karbo, but I think it's a nice connection to make, even retroactively.
Enigmatic Jester
2016-02-01 10:31:12 +0000 UTCI'm not sure, but for whatever reason, stuff I've downloaded from your patreon since being on here has not worked in Adobe Reader. The comics that I buy still work, but for whatever reason Adobe Reader won't. And it wouldn't work in Windows Picture Viewer either. I finally had to resort to using Windows Media Player.
Kain
2016-01-31 19:00:56 +0000 UTCDamn . . . this just keeps looking better and better. Have you created the sexiest vore sequence ever? I kinda think so. x3 But yeah, I really like the added intro, which I think really does a great job of setting the scene, as well as demonstrating Vivian's enchantment powers right from the start. The bit where the tooth bump broke the spell made me chuckle as well. Pillows don't have giant teeth! xD
PrinnyDood
2016-01-31 14:11:14 +0000 UTCI'm really puzzled by that o.o was the file not a ZIP file containing Jpeg pictures ?
Karbo
2016-01-31 09:01:48 +0000 UTCMhh. The reasons I changed this part of the page is to have an effect where you see a succession of close-ups organic panels so the come back to the outside views is more striking in term of rhythm. I'll see what I can do though ^^
Karbo
2016-01-31 09:01:11 +0000 UTCWell, this is absolutely astounding. It's hard to know where to begin. For starters, I love the intro page, as it really gives the viewer a sense of scale, and the you did a great job texturing Vivian and making her all squishy. Next, I really liked the addition of Malika's tongue present in Viv's mouth in a few panels. Overall, you did a really great job with the lighting and captured a distinct and dark tone that's especially appealing. As for the possibility of another page between 11 and 12... well, I don't want to sound entitled but... please dear God, yes, yes, yes! I need more of that scene! Thank you so much for all you've done!
Enigmatic Jester
2016-01-31 03:56:47 +0000 UTCokay, now that I can see it....holy crap. Amazing!!! Fantastic work as always, Karbo! It was a tiny bit harder to read in the current format than it usually is, but still wonderful!
Kain
2016-01-30 22:02:22 +0000 UTCYep head to breasts gulping scene is it possible that one (preferably on Melany) can still make it in ?
JohnboyX
2016-01-30 21:26:07 +0000 UTCThe panel on page 12 with the girl inside of Melany punching against her stomach walls which causes her to *BUUUUUURP* is soooooooooo incredibly HOOOOOOOT :O :O :O (please keep that) !!!!!!!!! It even makes up for her now inexistent head to breasts gulping scene which I miss a little :( . Also love the intro page as it really highlights the size difference between both prey and predator, same for the overall stomach sounds (there can even be more if it was me ;-) and the updated visual look of the comic as a whole (looks even way wayyyyyyy better than last time) . Bravo Karbo bravoooooooooo *roaring applause* ^_^!!!!!!!!!!! Moreover a little Off-Topic but could you please check my last PM and give me your final thoughts on the subject.
JohnboyX
2016-01-30 19:03:26 +0000 UTCOh damn, that's hot! >.<;
Meddwynn Ravencroft
2016-01-30 17:02:08 +0000 UTCPS; you changed the barefoot girl to shoed girl. What gives? Did someone complained or anything?
Feedfancier
2016-01-30 16:47:31 +0000 UTCwonderful! Can't wait for the final version.
Feedfancier
2016-01-30 16:46:05 +0000 UTCI'm torn. I'd love to comment, but I also don't want to spoil the experience of reading the completed comic without preconceptions.
Carl
2016-01-30 16:18:35 +0000 UTC
