Subeta agaisnt the invaders NYF
Added 2016-01-09 14:07:47 +0000 UTCremoved
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Beautiful
Blue
2016-04-08 16:56:54 +0000 UTCOhhh nice! This one is shaping up beautifully! Subby is always pretty damn cute, but as I said before, I think she's taking it to the next level here! :3 And for once, I think Anna hasn't even noticed someone standing on her work bench there. xD
PrinnyDood
2016-01-12 14:41:21 +0000 UTCActually it's a scene that happened "off camera". At a point Subeta greets Crisis and Lea and inform them she dealt with a band of attackers who gated in to attack Anna. And that's how she did it X3
Karbo
2016-01-10 17:39:23 +0000 UTCXD
Karbo
2016-01-10 17:37:05 +0000 UTCYep I'm sure you'll master the challenge this difficult picture represents :-) . Thank you very much for listening and accepting my criticism ;-) .
JohnboyX
2016-01-10 17:07:55 +0000 UTCAlright I'm going to make some corrections concerning the issues you raise ^^ But I have a bit of a problem when it comes to Subby's face.. I mean I do agree there are modifications to make and I'll definitely do that but on the other hand I don't really agree that the WIP version was the one to go with : / ( I have issues with her head shape in this one and how her mouth is positioned to much to the left for example ) But regardless I'm going to continue working on it and make sure it's good in the end ^^
Karbo
2016-01-10 16:39:48 +0000 UTCHmm added saliva on perfect looking mouth *HELL YEEEEEES* , change of nose *GODLY* . Missing blush effect (is this the right term ? ) underneath her eyes needs to be re-added though as it removes a lot of Subby's cuteness factor. The man she caught in her hand who was staring at her breasts also was a NIIIIICE addition (why remove that ? ) . Moreover not really feeling the eyes just yet ^^' . They look a little too big to me in relation to her whole face (was perfect in the last WIP ) . To be honest that overall chubby look on her face in the previous version speaks to me more (and only needed a change of the nose at most in my opinion) than the wider (vertically) look or whatever it is now . Sorry but when comparing the NYF with the last WIP something about Subeta's overall face (not talking about the mouth, nose, anatomy, kneeling pose, perspective, most preys and all the other GREAT looking details in the picture) definitely does not feel right to me when I switch between the two versions :( . EDIT : Aghh man I really hate being a grinch ^^' but I actually like Anna's more serious/angry look in the last WIP a lot more than the desperate one here too. EDIT 2 : Maybe the needed facial change isn't as big as I thought and just shrinking down the eyes, hair a little will do the trick of removing that strange stretchy "!No harm meant!" (couldn't think of a non-offensive word that gives you a better picture of the catalyst for my main criticism) Frankensubby (relating to Frankenstein) look. What do you think ?
JohnboyX
2016-01-09 18:30:55 +0000 UTCIs this a future manga event?
Feedfancier
2016-01-09 14:20:16 +0000 UTC... T'es un génie x3
Taiki Sensei
2016-01-09 14:12:43 +0000 UTC
