It's so strange to be at a point in the story where every new update brings new information now!
Here is what you should notice from this update: I was mentioning it in the last update, we now know why Joris keeps trying to kidnap the Boy!
... We also learn about Joris' kinks. Not important at all, I just wanted to give some nuances to the character, a bit of representation and have that funny scene lol. Joris is probably straight btw, he just has a strange attraction to Tera, but we don't know if it's only because he's a Black Death (admiration) or because he's attractive haha. There's a dialogue about that in the upcoming pages -
Another thing to notice is... that Joris knows Tera's face! How did you feel when Tera lifts his visor and Joris recognizes him?? A few panels later, we understand that it's because Tera and Joris' brother knew each other when they were teenagers. More info in the next update! ;D
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I like Tera's reaction when he understands that Joris has a fetish for transgender girls lol. Don't get me wrong, he's not really judging him, he's just processing it haha.
I know you love Tera's lines in the next panel -
Oh, that's also the first time we see casual-Tera, and not Black Death-Tera! It's like we're getting more intimate !!!?? haha
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If you're wondering how Tera found them, wait for the next update!
Btw I already started to storyboard the next pages and it really gives me Chapter 01 vibes: because they all 3 together again, and it gets a bit messy.
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QUESTION! Once their relationship has fully evolved, how about some very short chapters (just from time to time), a little more slice of life-ish? Chapters that don't help the plot (that we will not be able to place chronologically), but just bring funny situations, and talks about their daily life? A bit similar to the extras but clean and in this reality lol. They would be inserted between the real chapters.
You may ask why not integrate these scenes into the story? It's because I don't want to dilute(?) the main story with slice of life scenes. In a story, all scenes have a purpose (or should!). I did not do that in Chapter 2, and 3 and I regret it, it just ...slow down the story and I hate it.
I can give it a try, i don't know.
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I hope you liked this update (and Tera's skinny shirt lmao)
Thank you so much for the support <3
Mingo
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