And I'm just right on time! As usual!!!
If I wanted a good cliffhanger for my chapters I'd cut this one here lol. I have to think about it...
I screwed up with the therapist checking the drawings of the Boy, the scene was fine in my head but I realize now that it's be a bit confusing because of the way panels follow each other (and that sentence must be very bad English but I can't find the word lmao).
So just to make it clear for you: the therapist compares the first drawings the Boy did to the one he just drew. The therapist kept them and note the Boy's age. You can even assume that the Boy started seeing a therapist around age 10. At least that's what it says. (me showing but not saying things, again :I ) Plus we now know that this dark figure has been haunting the boy for quite some time now. I really hope it's not too hard to understand.
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I've never had crutches! And it shows, when Joris appears in the first panel he definitely not walk like someone on crutches lol. I needed to check how you walk with crutches (you kinda lean forward etc.) to do better in the next panels.
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A while ago I wondered how to keep Joris trying to catch the Boy for a bit when obviously Black Death is not after him. But I realized it just make sense, so if you're wondering too, don't worry, he will talk about it in the next pages!
That King Kong story just to show Joris probably didn't read the Bible and have that funny talk -
I wondered a lot about this scene. I didn't want Joris' intentions to be revealed too early. If he had asked the Boy to get into the trunk it would have been really suspicious immediately. So I played with the panels: we don't see the Boy getting into the trunk, we just have a shot of Joris talking about King Kong, and when we come back to the Boy we realize that he is in the trunk, with us probably thinking "what the hell you doing, Boy??"
Also had to update Joris' car to get that trunk.
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I think (hope!) the upcoming scene will be a really funny one!
Thank you for all the support during that year guys, I'm really grateful and I hope that the comics will continue to make you laugh, and maybe touch you! None of this would be possible without you! ♥ ❤
Michael Lohmeier
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