Birds Of A Feather, Chapter 3.6
Added 2026-02-19 13:04:49 +0000 UTCComments
Fantastic! Stupendous! Love the callbacks, the foreshadowing, the pacing! A question; the chunk of land your delightful protagonist purchased, is it outlined in roads or have roads as veins? I.e. are the roads barriers to active but hidden spycraft, or do the buildings shield the roads from external observation?
Udodelig Urningin
2026-02-20 02:14:44 +0000 UTC“That vitalizing areas” - I think you meant “REvitalizing”… “Smile showing when nobody was listening” - I think this should be “WATCHING”?
V01D
2026-02-19 22:15:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
SolusEclipse
2026-02-19 14:40:12 +0000 UTCChozo breaking canon as usual. Usually they do away the managers in slow and steady pace but when birb makes a deal, they all the sudden up in arms over not getting their cut lol. 😜 Chozo piece of the city is going to be very different from the OTL. 😀 More happiness than depression will overtake the anger. 😜
Duke of Coffee
2026-02-19 14:29:32 +0000 UTCCannot get enough of this birb
Raven
2026-02-19 13:31:08 +0000 UTC
