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Sienna & Charlene (WIP)

Added 2017-04-14 14:25:51 +0000 UTC

Here's a WIP of the next "snuggle" piece. Since Charlene is the jokester of the lot I thought a tickle scene would be appropriate.

There are some things I don't like about it so far. Charlene's mouth, Sienna's mouth (to a lesser extent, namely I just a little more detail on the top lip), some hand issues, etc..

Their bodies also have this strangely "female wrestler" look going on. I'm hoping that Mavis can make them look a bit more petite and elegant. To be more precise, thinner, longer limbs. Not to a large extent but... well hopefully he'll get what I'm talking about. xD

I wanted to try and put lines where I would prefer the limbs to be redrawn to, but I have no clue where to start. If the changes are too extreme then, at the very least, it can always function as a placeholder image.

Eh. Well let me know what you think. Any suggestions on what I could say about how to fix it would be much appreciated. :)