Patreon Avatar #187 + Update
Added 2022-03-07 07:24:55 +0000 UTCHey guys! Here's a new avatar for Verath! A fighter referenced from his own game character.
Youtube recording link here : https://youtu.be/R3BmP89jXd0
A little update about Gul.
For the past weeks, we have been working on the War of Bhubiz. We have reviewed the battle and noticed some events lacking key panels. We were also bothered by the scenes jumping too frequent from different perspectives. For example, this chapter focuses on Gul, then next chapter focuses on the adventurers. It goes on too much.
With that realized, we are on the process of improving them. There's still a lot of reused resources and will have similarity from the Canvas version. This time though, it will be a lot better.
We are open for criticism and willing to improve on them.
The greatest part is signing the next contract covering the episodes until the end of Gul's first season! Gul episodes will resume this coming March 24. Stay tune!
Comments
Yes, I agree. The Frantz events are taken out for now. It will be shown after the war. The Elven kingdom focus will also be consecutively realeased. Finally, we have worked on a map. Which will hopefully help us set the time and travelling more accurate. So we got these stuff in the bag. Thank you for pointing it out Luckyman. I am grateful the vision to make Gul better aligns.
ATENMARU
2022-03-14 07:10:01 +0000 UTCI have to say there are point in gul which can wait as aftermath. Such as the one where Frantz travels to the king castle. I also feel all the point in the elf village should all be in one set. Just until the elf king reveals that the village is under attack. From there it should be straight battles dealt in the village to reach a notable cliff hanger. That way you can coarse the story into them leaving the village to save the orcs From there everything should lead natrually to finale as the canvas version in last view chapters. With more panels added of course to make story flow more properly Beside that all I can say as a small critic is the time it takes for people to travel between kingdoms and villages. Because it means anybody with capable speed could reach a place in day. But also maybe the time of certain scenes is uncertain when reading it.
LuMan
2022-03-09 01:35:44 +0000 UTCAt least I tried
Yuudai
2022-03-08 04:54:37 +0000 UTCThat's a lot but it is too late to discuss this one. Grand scale wars will be later.
ATENMARU
2022-03-08 04:51:59 +0000 UTCAlso great job on the drawing
Yuudai
2022-03-07 07:43:15 +0000 UTCA minimum of 5k seems to be a safer bet
Yuudai
2022-03-07 07:42:57 +0000 UTCWell for starters a force of 300 demons is too small to be an army. A 1000 maybe but not 300.
Yuudai
2022-03-07 07:31:50 +0000 UTC
