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The Three Commandments - Page 24

And so it ends, the ultimate punishment: why kill both when one can remain to suffer?

(and yes that is a special dragon killing weapon, why do they have that? MAYBE WE'LL LEARN SOME DAY OOOOOOoooOOOOO)

The Three Commandments - Page 24

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So... who's the bad guy here again? Cause so far all I see is some sociopaths killing someone over quite stupid reasoning,(you're doing a great job here, god damn does the idea of this make my blood boil especially since I can see some people being this stupid).

Avery H. Mavery

Keep in mind that this is the background for why the three dragon rider commandments exist. Literally the three darkest moments in the Order's history. Aida and keleth broke this third commandment by becoming lovers just as Jenna and lorath did, putting them on the path to repeat history. Dragon rider chapter 2 is likely going to have Aida and keleth constantly working to keep their relationship secret, and/or figuring out how they can address their passion so it doesn't endanger their duty or the Order.

Zhon Lord

I was wondering if really you would illustrate such an horrible punishment, and it indeed seems you did. Such a sad ending... ='( But in a way, I guess it was a logical issue... even if the punishment could have been less hardcore. Despite this sad ending, it's a really great drawing anyway. I still love the universe you're creating and how you draw your comic. Keep up the good work. ;)

Akelun

Wow... I really hate this is the outcome... AND I hope this kingdom burns for it. Oh wait... It did once... I say do it again! That aside it is a very emotional comic but wow... Hello darkness my old friend... Kind of depressed I caught this at the end. I really liked your other comics but this one whew! I think I have seen enough for today. :(

Ryproar

They should at least milked him before execution.

My heart raced and skipped a beat at this page.

Well that sucks. What a bunch of bastards!

Felbun

but only for one of them. and there are some fates far worse than death.

Kov

I strongly suspected this result...I really didn't want to be correct. but it's good writing Jagon (and illustration too!)

Kov

Not gonna lie, this page made me literally sick to my stomach.

Gwen The Goblin

Well, that just hit hard in the gut.

Gwen The Goblin

So the punishment for falling for your dragon is the death of the dragon. That is really f%$#ed up.

Riptide The Dragon

I haven't seen such dark ending of any furry comic in my life. If that woman ever escaped/stayed alive, she would want to see the order burn to the ground for what they did. Heck, the conversation between the dragon rider pair and that woman would have been a sight to see.

Lev

Ho... ly... SHIT. I was expecting it to be the other way around, kill the rider and have the dragon be the one kept alive. Throw her off the launch, he has to watch her fall, unable to catch her before she splats against the stone below. But this.... yeah this is definitely more effective.

Zhon Lord

..............wow thats tough, Great job though on catching this emotional roller coaster of this final page.

Aquilak

Well, damn Jagon, that's way beyond how dark the first one was! O.=.O Few writers in this fandom can get that brutal with beloved characters!

But now I fear for our heroes. For what they did in Dragon Rider comic is apparently punishable by death.

Hiss

Welp... and there it goes. Very sad story.

Hiss


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