Taking a Dip Pages 5-6
Added 2022-02-03 21:16:48 +0000 UTCOnce again, sorry for the delay
I so love the comedic bottom left panel of the first page here. I doubt this is how the writer imagined the scene, but when I read the script, this exact image popped into my head.
And i like almost every panel in the second page.
If you're wondering why only 2 pages this time, it's because starting this(eh, last) month i will do two comics at the same time. Otherwise I would have to wait almost a year for another comic to start, which isn't fair to the other story submissions and for people who are not into this story here. I see this as a win-win, hopefully you guys too.
Comments
Thanks! While the majority will be about the vore part, there is also a regular-sex part.
Kibate
2022-02-13 07:46:22 +0000 UTCI agree with everyone else, the artwork is great as always and the diving pose is very dynamic! Will this comic be a vore only comic?
Scott Miller
2022-02-13 01:24:39 +0000 UTCI love the angry panel, that's really good. The whole thing is looking lovely.
Drunlade
2022-02-07 10:16:36 +0000 UTCThis is looking GREAT! I love the design you came up with for Iona! It’s so imaginative and lovely. Very original. And I’m truly ecstatic to see this story coming to life.
Xiao Renzhe
2022-02-03 21:33:52 +0000 UTC
