Settling In - Editing Banter

“Why don’t I show you the bedroom?”

SG: I'll take "double entendres" for $1000, Alex

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“Lucky for him it was just his tail…get your head out of the gutter.”

SG: Sure, his "tail"...we'll go with that…

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“A wha…Ooooohhhh” Kathy’s question was cut off as Xander’s tail slowly caressed up the young woman’s leg. The sensation was far more pleasurable than she was expecting and, with the help of the hypnotic orb, short circuited her thought processes quite nicely. It wouldn’t be recovering for the rest of the evening.

SG: I must be loopy because my first thought as I read and edited this was "yeah I could live with that..."

Updated: SG: I could still live with that!

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Xander smiled as he watched Kathy’s eyes glaze over as she bit down on her lower lip and tilted her head back, moaning softly.

SG: I think you can probably safely assume that you'll have pushed my buttons for the rest of the story…

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Her passions took over as she slid into his lap and ran her hands along his chest while his tail caressed up and down her legs.

SG: I'm going to end up having dreams about this half of the story and I blame you for that…

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She let out a soft sigh as her shoulders slumped and her head fell to Xander’s shoulder, breaking the kiss in the process.

SG: yup, buttons sufficiently pushed for the entirety of this page…

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“I had a wonderful evening…” Kathy said in a blank, flat tone. “I slept at home…I had a wonderful evening…I slept at home…”

SG: nothing like a blank expression and looping thoughts to push your buttons…

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“Bring it, asshole!” Nadia shouted as she stepped back into a fighting stance, ready to take on the incubus in hand to hand combat without fear.

SG: bold...stupid, but bold…

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Midnight said without a hint of expression on her face.

SG: i kinda like the whole hypnotized messenger role she has going here

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As Midnight finished the sentence, her eyes rolled up into her head and she let out a soft sigh. By all appearances, it seemed as though she was going to faint.

SG: well...damn, buttons pushed.

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As the light shone across her face she let out a soft sigh. The struggle in her eyes faded as her pupils began to dilate while her shoulders relaxed. Her jaw opened like she was going to try and say something, but after several moments of moving her mouth to try and speak, her jaw simply hung open limply.

SG: ok so we're going to finish off with continuous button pushing...that works…

Update: SG: i find it entertaining that so many of my comments are just me saying buttons pushed here...and here...aaaand here...

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The girls replied in unison, all in the same distant, relaxed voices. “Yes…”

SG: *shivers* ok...buttons successfully pushed. thanks for that :oP

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If she was anything like the other ‘reader girls’ that he had met over the years, she was probably so deeply engrossed in her book that she wouldn’t even notice his approach.

SG: i resemble that remark :oP

Me: The character is literally you!

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The most she did was adjust her position to allow for better lighting…and then turn the page.

SG: i'd like to think i wouldn't be that oblivious

Note: She would be.

Update: SG: Hey!

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As they did, the words on the page started to shift from one color to the next as the hypnotic energy of the orb merged with the ink, turning the very words the young woman was reading into a hypnotic orb that would draw her in even more deeply.

SG: ooooh...ok, well, that would pretty much knock me flat…

SG: every time i go to edit this part, this is where i always start to zone out :oP

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Every word she read just seemed to pull her deeper into the story. The world around her faded away as the world in the story took its place. Her shoulders relaxed as her posture began to loosen and a soft moan escaped her lips.

SG: i had to read through this one a few times...kept getting dazed i think

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Nothing else matters, just the words and the story, all real and vivid in your mind. You can feel that now, can’t you miss?”

SG: yeah...wait, dammit

Update: SG: heheh it’s funny seeing exactly where I zoned out.

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“Catelyn…”

SG: oh...damn, that's me (it honestly didn't register at first)

ME: **Facepalm**

SG: look i was admittedly a little dazed, give me a break :oP

Me: I know... I aimed EVERYTHING at you

SG: yeah i didn't get very far cause of that...it was working a little too well :oP

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“Cat…” Xander said, smiling as he slid a finger along her back softly. “That’s a lovely name. What are you reading, my dear?” he asked in a sensual voice as he softly kissed behind her ear.

SG:  *insert unintelligible noises from the editor here*

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Someone who could help you to…feel…everything you’ve ever dreamed about feeling…isn’t that right Cat?”

SG: Uh huh

Me: And this is where the editor took a little hypnotic nap…

SG: and still kept trying to edit and/or comment even though she was very very tranced out

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“You're in a very different kind of story now, Cat. A deep, hypnotic story…have you ever been hypnotized Cat?” he asked as he kissed her cheek softly

SG: yeah..i definitely think i’m more than a little out of it

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“You're hypnotized now…under my spell…completely helpless. You can realize that now, can’t you Cat?”

SG: yesss

(the editor would like to note that she was incapacitated and not fully mentally...with it...when posting this comment...so there... :oP)

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You’d like that little…chapter in your life… wouldn’t you Cat?”

SG: uh huh...damn..i think im slipping again

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Cat, for her part, was almost completely limp as her body sagged against him. Her face was supported by his warm, strong hands as he whispered more instructions into her helpless, open mind.

SG: *more shivers, sighs, moans, etc, etc, etc, from the editor*

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Xander deepened the kiss, draining more of her energy with each moment. No one would have suspected anything other than two people enjoying an intimate moment together. Slowly, Cat’s body began to go limp as it relaxed against him, finally sliding down into his hands as her body let go and surrendered to the sleepiness that had overcome her.

SG: i could live with a knock out like that right about now

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She was going to have a long night…but for now she was blissfully enjoying the state of complete relaxation. Nearly asleep, but not quite there.

SG: yep, i could live with that too

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A small form seemed to be moving under the paper, and before he could ask what it was, the head of a tiny dwarf hamster popped out of the paper and blinked at Xander.

SG: and this is where the editor's heart melted…

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but Xander could feel his skin crawling and knew she was around…somewhere.

SG: your spidey senses were tingling :oP

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“I’d be happy to come up with a few things you could do around closing time.”

SG: subtle :oP

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Since there wasn’t a show scheduled, the area was completely empty. Even the dressing rooms were dark.

SG: in any other situation that would be the start of a horror movie... :oP

Me: Wait till you see the story I have planned... "Five Nights at Spirals"

SG: only you could think of something like that

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To just sink into the wonderful atmosphere of the club…to relax…and just…surrender… to the music now.”

SG: dangerous thing to zone out to when you have music playing at your desk :oP

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His smile turned far more devious as his position allowed him an easy view down both of their shirts.

SG: far be it for you to leave that point out :oP

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A moment later Xander snapped his fingers next to her ear and her arms fell limp at her sides.

SG: unsurprisingly, i think i kind of blanked out for a moment there

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Xander broke the kiss and looked over his third hypnotic prize of the night. The beautiful blonde’s mouth was slightly open, head tilted upwards with her eyes closed as she slowly teetered on her feet.

SG: needless to say i like that image.

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Carefully and silently, she moved behind Tammy and dropped a crystal pendant in front of her eyes.

SG: heheh, I cant help it that I'm a sucker for shiny objects :oP

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“Pleasure…”

SG: ok that gave me a slight tingle and i'm not sure why…

Update: SG: Ok the same thing happened again and still have no idea why!

Note: I do, as the word Pleasure is a very old trigger of hers.

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The slight dilation of her pupil and the way her expression had softened was a good indication that she was starting to follow the suggestions in the subliminals.

SG: it's more fun to have no defenses against them anyway

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I think you’d like it if you could just look into my eyes…and let yourself slip away into them. You’ve seen me do it to so many girls in the past, in the old club. You’ve seen so many young women just stare into my eyes…and you’ve always wondered what it must be like…what it must feel like to simply gaze into my eyes now…and feel your mind and body just give in to their desires. To give in to the powers that I have...to the pleasures that I can give you now Celene.”

SG: yeah...i'm not sitting here imagining this at all...and i’m certainly not zoning out to it…

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But now…with him staring into her eyes…she couldn’t help but wonder…what it might be like.

SG: yeah…

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Xander leaned back and stood up, allowing Celene to move even closer to him. She was slightly shorter than he was, so he was still able to stare down into her eyes as her body pressed against his.

SG: nothing like a good seduction scene to get the buttons successfully pushed…

Me: Well I am writing porn

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He didn’t need to use any of his abilities at this point, just the power of confidence, of his personality, to bring her into him. That and the subliminals that were wreaking havoc with her mind. “Give in to your desires…” he whispered softly...it was all the encouragement she needed.

SG: so many buttons are getting pushed here…

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She felt both helpless and empowered at the same time. Strong and confident, yet weak and submissive…and oh so very sleepy.

SG: and that's why it pushes buttons :oP

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Holding her upright so the kiss could continue…and so she could…keep feeling…feeling the…the…pleasure…

SG: ok i actually shivered reading that part a little, it was a nice little trail off... :oP

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She had always loved the tingling feeling that she got in the back of her mind when she listened to the commands hidden in the subliminal messages.

SG: i get the same feeling when i hear binaurals :oP

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She couldn’t help but fantasize about how he might be hypnotizing her, blanking her mind and bending her to his will.

SG: well that makes two of us now

Update: SG: well i wasn't thinking about that at the moment but thanks for putting my mind back there...

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Sara knew she should look away, that she should stop staring at this total stranger’s breasts

SG: but this is porn, so we all know that's not going to happen

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The idea that she was being hypnotized, seduced, and controlled by a perfect stranger...and didn’t even realize that stranger was a succubus...would have had her moaning with anticipation.

SG: buttons pushed

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And they were doing an exceptional job of activating her submissive side and bringing her desire, her need to submit, to the surface.

SG: ah the wonder of subliminal messages :oP

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What can I say, women’s fashion is complex!

SG: never has a more accurate statement been said in porn

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“That…that won’t work.”

SG: famous last words…

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Every tiny, special place on her back and shoulders that would unconsciously trigger the young woman to relax was hit in perfect sequence, again and again, by her very own, hypnotized and controlled girlfriend.

SG: well when you put it that way, buttons pushed

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Slowly swinging back and forth...back and forth.

SG: what does it say for me that i can zone out watching an imaginary dreamcatcher while reading this?

Me: That you’re an easy target

SG: I don’t know what you’re talking about

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“Feeling just what Sara felt. Just what you wanted to feel. Blank and relaxed. Open and hypnotized…isn’t that right?”

SG: definitely almost answered this

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Without so much as a thought,

SG: lucky for her she had none to spare anyway

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As she writhed against him he turned the tingle of joy into a full blown orgasm, and used it to slowly drain her energy. Little by little her body sagged against his until she went completely limp and sighed, fainting against him.

SG: yep...buttons pushed. gotta love a nice energy drain every now and then... :oP

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And even though a kiss wasn’t nearly as pleasurable as an orgasm, it could be just as enthralling.

SG: i'd settle for both, personally

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Cat never noticed what was happening to her, and more than likely wouldn’t have even if she hadn’t been hypnotized.

SG: because yes, i am that oblivious

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Xander smiled and lowered the now sleeping elf to her knees, then gently to the stage floor where she could sleep off the effects of being drained with the others.

SG: i have energy drains on the brain because of this story…

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