The Girls of S.L.E.E.P. - N.C.U. - Outline

This is the outline I used to make the Girls of S.L.E.E.P. stories. One of the things I've noticed and want to correct in my own writing is just how sparse the outlines are, I plan in the near future to spend more time on the outline phase a way of helping the writing process move more quickly and smoothly for me, having an outline item that says "do induction" is kinda just punting the work down the road.  So in the future I hope that they outlines will be far more detailed. 

For now Enjoy!  also warning SPOILERS if you haven't read the story yet. 

Sigma Lambda Epsilon Epsilon Pi

Dorm Room

• Klaire is sitting down reading, engrossed in her book 
• Rayne walks in and see’s Klaire. Smiles
• Klaire throws a fit about this being her time. 
• Rayne calmly walks up to klaire and in a strong firm tone tells her to relax. 
• Klaire is visibly shaken by this and tries to push back. 
• Rayne cuts her off, tells her she can have her time. That she only needs to grab something. 
• Klaire seems taken back says it’s ok. But only this time. 
• Rayne smiles and takes a step closer stares into klaires eyes
• Begins to tell klaire that some things need to change here… 
• That she knows it’s all an act… 
• That klaire can’t be this mean 
• So when she comes back tonight, things are going to be different. 
• They are going to be roommates, 
• They are going to be equals. 
• And klaire is going to learn to relax. 
• And enjoy her time with rayne. 
• Klaire is totally taken back, confused. 
• Rayne smiles and points to klaires stuff on Rayne’s bed
• Tells her that will be cleaned up. In an hour. 
• Klaire just kind of blinks and mummbles out a ‘ye..yes…’
• Rayne grabs her back and exist the room. 
• Klaire is stuck just staring off into space and mumbles out. “What the hll just happened?”

Outside the dorm room

• Rayne slides down the wall nearly fainting from shock at pulling that off… 

Private commons area. 

• Rayne walks in, Trisha and Laura are already there
• Eve walks in. is introduced to rayne
• Trisha explains that the sorority will have two levels. 
• Officers, who are the hypnotists and the only ones that know whats going on. 
• And members the girls they will be hypnotizing. 
• Rayne looks around and asks if everyone there will be officers. 
• Trisha agress even though eve is confused. Comments she’s not the best hypnotist. 
• They brush it off as being jsut fine… they’ll help her. 
• Trisha starts an induction on eve. 
• Laura nudges rayne then starts in on the induction
• Rayne joins in 
• Soon eve is hypnotized. 
• They give eve suggestions to be a better hypnotist. 
• Literally making her a hypnotist. When triggered.
• They wake eve. 
• Before everyone gets there Rayne asks Trisha what the sorority will be called. 
• Trisha just smipels and says Sigma Lambda Epsilon Epsilon Pi
• The girls try and figure out what that would look like given that it’s longer. 
• Eve figures ito ut first and says in an innocent tone but a devious look on her face. 
• S.L.E.E.P. to rayne and Laura. 
• Both girls go out. 

Possible break, and bonus/ 

• Jackie shows up, they small talk about the hypnosis group
• Jackie is just there to support Trisha in her endevour but doesn’t really believe in hypnosis. 
• Cheyenne shows up a few minutes later
• Doesn’t believe in hypnosis and won’t be participating. Just there for fun. 
• Carly shows up to observe for the shcool paper. 
• Trisha stands up and explains that they are here to induct officers and members. 
• Explains the different. 
• Explains that an officer must demonstrate their hypnotic abilities… 
• Produces a hat, and the girls draw a number. 
• Trisha explains that the two with matching numbers will try to hypnotize one another. 
• The winner will be an officer, 
• The loser will be a member. 
• Rayne looks concerned but trisha leans in and whispers “it’s rigged” with a giggle. 
• Trisha asks for who has number 1. 
• Eve and Carly
• Induction based of of something soothing and sensual. 
• Carly goes out. 
• Trisha tells her to give her a suggestion. 
• Trisha turns Carly into a posable dolly
• Leaves her hypnotized. 
• Number 2
• Laura and Cheyenne
• Something magical like induction wise. 
• Suggests Cheyenne become a kitty
• Hamm it up for kitty. 
• Number 3, Jackie and rayne
• Rayne practices her dominance. 
• Almost completely will jackie under her control
• Turns her into a sexy french maid. 
• Trisha smiles and then says “my turn”
• Trisha hypnotizes the three hypnotists.  One by one but at the same time. 
• With the girls all under, Trisha programs the rolls into the girls
• Scene ends with an orgy. 
• Then the members leaving hypnotized. 
• The officers are woke up. Eve is detriggered. 
• Trisha and the girls simply giggle at what little they remember. 
• Rayne watches trisha and her position of power and decides she wants control. 

Later that night in the dorm room. (read opening of part one before writing this)

• Rayne walks in.
• Klaire is pretending to be asleep, nervous
• Rayne sits down next to Klaire’s bed says “I know your nto sleeping… “
• Klaire sits up nervously not sure whats going on. 
• Rayne smiles and turns on a desk light and reveals she has a coffee for Klaire.
• Her favorite one, has a coffee of her own. 
• Ends with Rayne asking “So… tell me about yourself please Klaire…”
• Klaire just gulps and takes a sip of her coffee with a meek smile.