Game, Set and Ass (Commission)

Key: MC, FD, FF, FFF, tickling, hypnosis. 

Description: The succubus Albedo hypnotizes a young tennis player, Marta, into becoming a hypnotic mistress.  (This is a commission by a patron who will remain unnamed unless they decide to reveal themselves.)

Marta walked into her hotel room looking sweaty, tired, and a little disappointed. She dropped her tennis racket behind the door and took a moment to stretch, raising her arms above her head and leaning as far as she could to each side. Her long legs were spread enough to give her a firm base, which had the side effect of flexing her perfectly shaped ass as she moved from side to side. The blue training shorts she wore hugged her butt much more tightly than the loose fitting ‘Ukraine’ team jersey, and her blonde ponytail bounced gently against her back as she continued to stretch. 

The practice session had not gone as well as she would have liked. Her coach was insistent that she fine tune her strengths, even though she would have preferred to work on fixing her weaknesses. Unfortunately she was just too submissive to stand her ground and tell her coach otherwise, and in the end she was left feeling stuck in a rut. It was beginning to frustrate her. 

She sighed and pulled her hair out of its ponytail, yanking her shirt up and off of her body in one smooth motion and dropping it on the bed. Her blue sports bra hugged her body, giving her breasts a more plump appearance as she stretched out again. “All I need right now is a nice relaxing shower. That should clear my head.” she said to herself, splashing some cold water on her face just before she turned around to pull the shower curtain aside. 

As soon as she did, a voice behind the curtain said “I think I can help clear your mind…” as a hand reached behind the young tennis player’s head and pulled it forward with a quick jerk. “Sleep! Nice and deep.” the succubus behind the curtain, Albedo, said with a smile as Marta’s face landed with a soft thump into the succubus’ breasts. 

Poor Marta, on the other hand, never even realized what was happening. One moment she was pulling aside the shower curtain, and the next, before her body could even react, she was being pulled forward. Some part of her heard Albedo’s words, but her subconscious was the only part that needed to process them. The young tennis player was completely unconscious long before her face sank between the mounds of the succubus. 

Albedo simply smiled at the site before her. “Looks like you were sleepy…doesn’t it, my dear?” The only response she got was a small muffled snore from between her breasts. “I’ll take that as a yes.” She took a moment to admire the scene in the mirror. Marta’s ass was still flexed firmly, even as she slumped against the taller succubus. Albedo’s black feathered wings slowly started to wrap around the young woman’s body to support her, while the succubus admired just how nicely the two pale white horns that wrapped around her forehead managed to perfectly frame her own face. “Damn, I look good tonight.” she said as she carelessly tossed the young woman over her shoulder and carried her to the bed.  

Albedo closed her eyes as she moved her hand along the young woman’s head while the tips of her feathered wings slowly maneuvered themselves to slide along her feet, causing her hypnotized body to twitch as she let out a soft giggle. She then gently pressed the pad of her index finger into Marta’s temple. As she did, the young woman’s eyes lit up under her eyelids while the succubus worked her magic on the mind of her helpless prey. After all...a few adjustments to her personality were in order. She needed to be more dominant, less submissive, and a good dose of knowledge on hypnotism would be helpful, too. 

After several minutes of working on the young woman’s mind she removed her finger, and with it the glow from her eyes. “Let’s see how you handle yourself...” she said, snapping her fingers to wake the young woman. 

Marta’s eyes opened as a devious smile crossed her face. “Thank you mistress, I won’t disappoint you.” she said as she leaned over to the desk phone and called for her room to be cleaned. Meanwhile, Albedo moved into the closet, where she would have a better view, and waited for the maid to arrive. 

Moments later there was a knock at the door. Rather than open it, Marta chose to sit on the bed, out of sight from the entrance, and simply wait. After a few more knocks, the door could be heard unlocking and a lovely maid wearing a name tag reading ‘Rayne’ walked into the room. She was short, but well built, and wore a traditional black and white maid outfit complete with long black stockings. 

Rayne made her way into the room, gasping at the sight of Marta laying on the bed, still in her tennis shorts and a sports bra. Her hair was flowing over her shoulders to frame her face, which wore a playful grin. “Oh! I am so sorry, miss” Rayne said. “I didn’t see you there. You…you called for room service?” 

“Yes I did.” Marta said with a smile as she seductively rose from the bed, conveniently showing off her legs in the process. “Although it wasn’t my room that I wanted serviced...” she said as she slid a crystal pendant necklace off of her hotel nightstand. 

“I don’t understand, miss?” Rayne lied. She knew exactly what Marta was after, but she wasn’t going to jump in bed with a random stranger for no reason. 

“Then let me help it become clear for you, my dear.” She walked up to the shorter girl and dangled the pendant in front of her eyes. “This is a special gift that was given to me long ago. I only show it to the most…special of people.” she said with a smile. “Do you want to know what is so very…very special about this now, my dear Rayne?” 

Rayne glanced at the pendant with a look of confusion before looking back to Marta. “Sure, why not?” she replied, trying to keep her tone as professional as possible.  

Marta smiled and continued. “You see it has this very special cut, that allows the light to refract off of it in a very…soothing and relaxing pattern…that makes it…so hard…to…look away…from…from... “ Marta stopped in mid sentence as she simply stared into the pendant. Her face was completely slack and her eyes were practically saucers as they stared into the gem dangling in front of her.

It took Rayne a few moments to realize what was happening. That Marta hadn’t paused for effect, but instead had managed to hypnotize herself. “Seriously?” Rayne asked to a non-responsive Marta. “Oh well…no sense wasting an opportunity!” she said with a smile as she raised her hand in front of Marta’s eyes and snapped her fingers, commanding her to sleep. 

Marta instantly dropped the pendant as her eyes slipped closed and her body teetered towards the bed. Rayne used her quick reflexes to catch the pendant and then, before Marta fell, pushed her onto the bed and watched as the half naked tennis player flopped onto it, face first. “It is pretty…” Rayne commented as she examined the pendant. 

Rayne took a moment to let her hands slide over Marta’s firm body as she grinned deviously. “That was very naughty of you…” she said as her tone turned from playful to dominant “Very naughty indeed. I should give you a spanking!” She let her hands glide to Marta’s shorts and pulled them down to reveal her pure white ass, which had been protected from the sun and without so much as a hint of a tan. “Naughty, naughty girl!” Rayne said with a sadistic smile as she took a test slap on Marta’s ass, watching her carefully for any sign of reaction. 

There were none. And so Rayne spanked her again, harder, then harder again, and harder still. One slap after another as Marta’s butt slowly turned deeper shades of red. By the time Rayne’s hand could no longer take any more, Marta’s ass was a perfect sparkling red. “That should make sitting down difficult for a few weeks.” she said, grinning evilly. 

Rayne looked down at the helpless young woman and couldn’t help but smile. “Well, I am almost done with my shift.” she said, looking around and quickly sliding her panties down her legs and carefully placing them on the nightstand. “Can you hear me, little one?” she whispered into Marta’s ear. 

Between deep, helpless snores she noticed the young woman’s head nod. “Good girl. I want you to sit up just a bit, my dear.”  Rayne helped Marta sit up on all fours on the bed and then sat down herself, having already pulled up her skirt, and guided Marta’s head between her legs. “That’s a girl. Just let yourself relax…and sink deeper and deeper into my pussy. And now, my dear…you can start to lick…and suck...and eat me out now.” 

Albedo watched from the closet as her newly hypnotized dominant was completely subjugated and made to serve the girl she had intended to ensnare. “We have much work to do with you, little one.” she whispered from the closet. Not that she needed to whisper...no one could hear her over Rayne’s moans of ecstasy. 

After several orgasms, Rayne snapped her fingers and put Marta back to sleep. She took a moment to clean herself up and put her panties back on while the young tennis player snored away in a deep hypnotic sleep, face down on the bed. “I’ll be back in a few minutes…don’t go anywhere!” she said with a smile to the completely non-responsive Marta as she casually exited the hotel room. 

As soon as the door to the hotel room clicked shut, the closet door flew open and a rather angry Albedo stormed out of the closet and over to Marta. She grabbed the snoring young woman by the hair and lifted her head off of the bed. “You will listen.” she started, only to realize the woman wasn’t paying attention, prompting her to open Marta’s eyes with one hand as she continued to hold her head up with the other. “You will listen to me. You are not just dominant, you are now Mistress Marta…the most powerful hypnotist in the entire world. You have power and knowledge beyond that of anyone else on the planet, save for only one… me. When that stupid girl returns, you will show me your worth as a mistress and hypnotize her! Understand?” she asked angrily. 

Marta let out a soft snore that sounded vaguely like the word “yes”, which was impressive given her current state. Albedo simply rolled her eyes and dropped the girl’s head onto the bed, where it landed with a thud. 

“Wake up!” she commanded as she snapped her fingers. She would have taken a moment to give the girl a longer pep talk…or a scolding…or both, but there was a click at the door. Rayne was returning. She quickly jumped back into the closet and closed the door behind her, peering through its wooden slats to observe. 

As the door opened, Rayne and Trisha walked in both wearing variants of the same maid’s outfit Rayne had worn earlier. Both were giggling playfully until they came face to face with a wide awake and seductively posed Marta. “Hello again…” started Marta with a smile. 

“Oh!” said Rayne with enough of a start that she bumped into a confused Trisha. “You’re…you’re awake? But I didn’t tell you to wake up?” she said, getting nervous that she might get in trouble for hypnotizing a guest. Not that she really needed the job. 

“No, you didn’t.” Marta said with a smile as she picked up her pendant from the bed and held it up in front of the two maids’ eyes. “I woke myself up. And now it’s time for your nap, my dears.” 

Rayne rolled her eyes and glanced at Trisha, who still wore an expression of confusion. “Don’t worry, last time she put herself out. I can’t imagine this will take long.” She cleared her throat and glared defiantly at Marta. “Do your worst!”

Marta smiled and began to swing the pendant from side to side in front of the two maids. “Oh, you may be confident now…” she started with a smirk “but rather quickly you begin to notice how things have changed. How things seem different this time. How you are not on the solid footing that you believe that you are…how things seem to be…slipping away from you...little by little.  The pendant didn’t seem like much before…but now you can’t seem to help but follow it, from side to side, as your eyes naturally follow it, left and right, left and right, slowly and easily... “

Although Rayne and Trisha were both confident in their abilities, they couldn’t help but find themselves watching the pendant slowly and gently swinging from side to side without realizing it. The longer that they watched, the more their bodies seemed to relax. The more their expressions loosened and started to become slack. The confident, smug looks on both of their faces had long since faded away. But as Rayne’s hands fell, she snapped herself awake…not enough to break free completely, but enough to keep both her and Trisha from being completely helpless. For now.

It was at this point that Albedo decided it was time to help her new hypnotic pet. She quietly slid out of the closet and moved closer to Trisha and Rayne, which was easy to do given that they had their backs to her. Not to mention their current state of being extremely focused on the pendant swinging before them. In fact, the girls were so preoccupied that they never noticed Albedo slowly lifting up their skirts, just enough to slide a hand under each one. They never noticed as she carefully hooked her thumbs into their panties and slowly, gently, pulled them down. They were too focused to notice all of that. But Albedo sticking a thumb up each of their asses…that was pretty damn hard to miss. 

Both girls gasped as their eyes grew wide. The shock of the sensation took both of them completely by surprise. Obviously. But the shock also completely broke any and all resistance they may have had. They never so much as spoke a word as their eyes locked onto the pendant as it swung back and forth before them. All the while, Albedo wiggled her thumbs in the girls’ butts, working the pleasure centers deep inside of them and slowly, gently, draining them little by little. 

Finally, the girls’ eyes started to flutter as Trisha let out a high pitched moan and sank to the floor, deeply asleep. Rayne, however, kept focusing as long as she could, shivering and shuddering under the sensations that she had never experienced before…until she finally sighed and joined Trisha on the floor in a snoring heap. 

Marta smiled at Albedo, pleased with herself, and blew her a kiss., “Thank you mistress. That worked out…nicely.” The two shared a brief laugh before picking both girls up and depositing them on the bed. Albedo took a seat and watched as Marta slowly caressed every inch of the girls, starting at their feet and working her way up their bodies very slowly, very deliberately. When she reached both of their butts, she stopped and decided to indulge herself in a little revenge. “This should teach you not to spank your mistress!” she said, yanking both girls panties up as hard as she could into a deep, deep wedgie that made both girls’ butts stand out even more perfectly in the light. 

Soon after she began removing their clothing. Shoes, stockings, skirts, tops, panties, and bras were all discarded into a pile one by one as the young tennis player took her time exploring every inch of her two new conquests. Once they were naked, she took a moment to slide down to the girls’ feet and tickling their soles with her hair, causing their bodies to jerk and twitch under the sensations they were helpless to resist. A tiny giggle escaped Rayne’s lips before slipping away into a snore as both girls continued to sink deeper and deeper.

Albedo merely sat and watched her pet with a smile, pleased with another night’s work.