A Walk In The Woods - Editing Banter

Story: Xander shot the man a sideways look “Your granddaughter is named Feisty Squirrel?”

“What? No! My granddaughter is named Emily. I was pointing out the feisty squirrel, in the tree!”

SG: ROFLMAO. Ok, I laughed way too hard at that, nicely done :oP

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Story: “Hey!” Xander shouted which caused the tail’s tip to shoot straight up and ‘look’ at his face. “You’re supposed to be hiding!” He shouted again. The tail hung it’s head in shame

SG: heheh interesting image, and kinda cute in an odd way :oP

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Story: Her face was slack and she was staring deeply into the orb across the way. Completely hypnotized. 

SG: From a golf ball sized orb?!? :oP

Me: Size matters not... judge me by my size do you?

SG: no yoda, i would never judge you by your size

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Story: “Or what? You’ll use another orb on me?” 

SG: I kinda find myself talking to characters a lot when i'm reading, don't ask me why - it just happens - but I read that and found myself doing that with her, because my response to that was "emily, i think i could figure that out hypnotized or not, what do you think?!?'

Me: that is EXACTLY what I'm hoping for. people connecting to the characters.

SG: mission accomplished

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Story: Xander smiled at her with a deviously playful grin “Well then…” he said before he dipped her over his knee, causing her to let out a very loud, high pitched scream before catching her and pulling her up to look face first into a stable, bright, baseball sized orb of hypnotic energy flashing in front of her eyes.

SG: Dang, that's one way to catch someone off guard. I like the image, though.

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Story: As it absorbed into her head, into her brain, into her mind… her eyes glowed gently under her closed eyelids

SG: I don't know why, but I like that image