The Spirals Nightclub Part 2 - Bonus Scene

By the time Celene turned to run up the stairs, the subliminals had completely hypnotized the very suggestible Veo. With her eyes blank and vacant she rose from her chair, every part of her body spinning and gyrating. Her dancing was far less angelic than you might expect. She moved her body in ways that most exotic dancers would be jealous of…all while keeping her wings directly above her, swaying from side to side to help her keep her balance.  Her elegant dress only aided in her ability to spin and move without worry of falling over. 

She moved her body slowly through the entranced crowd on the second level as she danced her way over to the stairs. But before she could make her way to the dance floor on the third level, her dazed mind noticed two young women near the edge of the stairs. They appeared to be holding their ears, as if they were aware of the subliminals on some level. As if they could somehow hear them. 

The first was trying to yell into the second’s ear, advising her to leave the club, which the second seemed to agree with. On a subconscious level, which was really the only level she was functioning on, Veo knew that this would probably cause bad press for the club. And by extension, Celene. So she decided to help the two young ladies enjoy their evening a bit more. 

Without effort, she managed to dance her way between the young women and their escape route. Just as they were about to reach the stairs she spun on her heels, doing several 360 degree spins before landing directly in front of them. She spread her arms wide, and her wings even wider. With one smooth motion the tips of her wings moved past the two girls and gently wrapped around their shoulders, creating a circle around them that they could not escape. The first turned to Veo to confront her, but instead was met with an orb of angelic energy floating directly in front of her face. She didn’t manage to get out so much as the first syllable of her complaint before her voice trailed off and her face slowly went slack. The orb hovering in front of her eyes began to lose its shape after a few moments, and turned into a mist that floated towards the woman. As the mist moved closer to her, it slipped into her eyes and caused them to take on a fogged over, almost whited out look, leaving her completely helpless in the process. 

Her friend was too occupied with the massive blackened wings that had surrounded them to notice what had happened. As she turned to her friend and saw her blank, whited out eyes she gasped. “Are you ok? What the hec….” Her question was cut off as her friend pulled her into a kiss. Now these two young women were not ‘those’ kind of friends, so the kiss completely derailed any thoughts the second girl had going on in her mind and replaced them all with a rather appropriate “What the fuck?!” 

But as that thought flew through her mind, the first girl’s eyes opened and the mist floated from her eyes into her surprised friend’s. It moved through them like a fog until they, too, were completely whited out. As the kiss broke the second girl was left stunned and blank. Both were now completely under the angel’s spell.

But the angel was under the effects of the subliminals, and they were commanding her to dance. So with her two new subjects in tow, she danced her way to the third level and began to put on a show no one there would remember...including her.  

Moving her body in ways that seemed to defy nature…for a human...the angelic general moved to the music with as much passion and energy as she could. All the while her hypnotized ‘backup dancers’ did their best to keep up. Of course this was attracting the attention of the males in the club. Hypnotized or not, some things just work on autopilot for a guy. 

One by one, random men began to approach the three dancers. The first of the two hypnotized girls broke her dance with Veo quite easily, and slid her body along the man’s.  It didn’t take long for this to progress. A dance turned into a kiss, a kiss into a squeeze, a squeeze…into them moving to the edge of the dance floor to find a wall that would support them. 

The second backup dancer put up more of a fight. She continued to dance with Veo even after two men joined her, one on either side. But when a third moved in front of her, she finally lost sight of Veo and fell into the dance of the men surrounding her. She did her best to give each of them her attention, but she only had two hands. They, on the other hand, had six that were all put to good use. Her moans could be heard even over the music…for quite some time. Until exhaustion kicked in. 

But one brave, horny man decided to directly approach Veo. She recognized what he was after, even in her entranced state, and moved closer to dance with him. But being the kind of girl that she was, she always kept her body at least an inch away from his. She was able to move just out of the way whenever he tried to touch her, or whenever he tried to grind against her. This, needless to say, annoyed the man, even in his hypnotized state.  

He continued to get closer and closer to her, until finally he tried to move in for a kiss. But he never made it. As he moved towards her, her lips getting almost painfully close, she raised a single finger in front of him. All at once he stopped moving, but not by choice or hypnotic suggestion. It was as if he was being held back by an invisible force exerted along his entire body. Veo smiled in her blank, hypnotized state and simply said “Now now, that's not very gentlemanly…” She pulled her finger away from his face and as she did a white mist was pulled from his body into hers. He fell asleep on his feet…completely drained of his energy by the angel. She blew him a gentle kiss and his body floated to the side of the club for him to sleep off the effects.

Veo continued to dance, alone, in the middle of the dance floor, since her hypnotized backup dancers were exhausted from their own adventures. As the song began to change, though, she felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around to see Xander standing there with his hand held out. Even though she was hypnotized, something about what he said moved her inside. Five simple little words meant so much to her… “May I have this dance?”