Commercial Script Sneak Peek

I have been working on scripts with a friend of mine and it looks like she will be helping me write out my scripts. See below for an example of one and the format that is being used. 

FURRY CON-FFESSIONS PROMO COMMERCIAL 

First Draft 8/10/19

A1   SHOW MONTAGE    A1

NARRATOR (V.O.)

This week on Furry Con-Fessions

1   CASE #1 STOLEN OC 1

TITLE CARD "CHARACTER CRIMINAL"

Four guests are sitting next to each other on separate seats. Each is wearing similar fursuits. GUEST #1 is agitated and accusatory towards the other guests. Guests #2 and #3 are confused and resentful by the accusation. Guest #4 is wearing the exact same fursuit and playing innocent. 

GUEST #1

These are all clearly rip-offs of my fursona! I designed my OC years ago and then all these copies show up?

Guests #2 and #3 mime that their suits are clearly different. 

AUDIENCE

*Boos*

GUEST #4

I used a free character base and it just came out this way!

SASSY AUDIENCE MEMBER

Ain't nobody got time to make their own fursona!

2  Case #2 MISTAKEN IDENTITY  2

TITLE CARD "FURRY FRAUD"

Guest #5 is sitting on a chair crying, being consoled by the host. They are a bit distraught, but holding it together. One a small screen is Guest #6 in suit back stage. 

GUEST #5

He was so tender and romantic. We spent the whole convention in each other's arms.

AUDIENCE *Whistles*

GUEST #5

I never even saw his face or got his name.

HOST

Well, we tracked him down and he's right back stage.

GUEST #5

Oh my god, really?

AUDIENCE *Cheers*

Guest #5 is getting really excited. A monitor comes on and Guest #5 can see Guest #6. Guest #5 is on the edge of his seat. 

HOST

But there's a dark reason why he never showed his face. Should we reveal it now? 

GUEST #5

Of course! I'll love him no matter what. 

AUDIENCE *Aww*

HOST

Mystery furry, please remove your fursuit head! 

Guest #6 removes his head to reveal that it's the same person as Guest #5

AUDIENCE *Gasp*

HOST

That's right. You're mystery man, was you!

GUEST #5

Wait, that doesn't... 

Scene cuts midsentence

3  Case #3 Paternal Problem  3

Guest #7 and Guest #8 sit side by side. Guest #7 cradles a plush in their arms while Guest #8 is agitated about it. 

GUEST #7

All I know is I got home from the convention and when I opened my suitcase 9 months later, there's this baby inside with his eyes. 

Close up shot of plush. 

AUDIENCE *Awww*

HOST

You didn't open your suitcase for 9 months? 

Scene does short time jump to skip ahead.

GUEST #8

I'm telling you people, I didn't do anything.

HOST

And the results of the paternity tests say, you are not the father!

AUDIENCE *Cheers and Boos*

Guest #8 jumps from his seat and does an over the top celebratory dance while Audience continues. Host stops Guest #8 with a grin. 

HOST

But we also have a surprise paternity test we also performed!

AUDIENCE *Cheers*

Camera jumps to Hugwolf shuffling towards Guest #8 with arms outstretched. Guest #8 is shocked and frightened. 

GUEST #8

Oh no!

A2  Closer   A2

Show Logo to sound of audience cheering

NARRATOR 

Don't miss all the exciting action on the next Furry Con-Fessions