Let's Play, Page 10
Added 2016-01-12 07:45:32 +0000 UTCNow kiss! OwO
Okay, that's the end of the first chapter. What did you guys think? I tried to fix all the bits that were pointed out as needing to be corrected. I also know the plot isn't exactly groundbreaking. I wanted to get my feet wet with a simple rom-com that people could just sit back and read casually.
After this first chapter, I'm thinking I might want to change the way I draw the lines. The clean lines look good, but they end up being very stiff, whereas the sketched lines are a lot more expressive and loose. I don't know, I'm going to think about it some more.
Thank you for any feedback you have to offer! <3
Comments
Oh man this is so cool <333 (I love that last panel. She's SO CUTE)
2016-01-16 04:59:10 +0000 UTCNothing wrong with a rom-com. (: I am super pumped for this. :D
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2016-01-12 15:14:11 +0000 UTC
