Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 160
Added 2024-07-15 04:48:15 +0000 UTCJuly 15, 2024
NOTE: This is a fun slice-of-life chapter that also advances the plot. Hope you enjoy!
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Comments
That's honestly what I'm hoping for also, for those 2 specifically to be a bonded pair with Kai, it would make sense, just like would he used a spell to bond Miriam and Delilah
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-13 22:59:06 +0000 UTCOh man I am loving Kelsey as a character, but I don't like how all of this from her taste to the way she makes him feel makes Rachael feel inadequate, she doesn't deserve that at all. And why hasn't Kelsey mentioned her twin? Also I don't like that when he checked in with his woman we didn't get info about Delilah, Rebecca, or Elizabeth.... I sure hope you're not leading to someone being missing!
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-13 22:57:28 +0000 UTCYou know we aren't just here for the sex scenes right? This had a lot more of the stuff we like to see aside from sex I love dialogue and banter between characters, it adds more depth to them as opposed to no jokes and friendly jabs, I also reaalllllyyyyy want to see him claim kelsey like when she bent over in the conference room(perfect opportunity for a sexual scene that doesn't take up half a chapter) but I very much think most of us are good with you omitting some of the sex scenes keep the really important ones like first times with newer characters but don't pretend they didn't happen give decent details about position and such and acknowledge it happened and then back to main plot and slice of life you can alternate chapters with sex scenes and slice of life to try and find a kinda balance but I did really enjoy this chapter
ReadingRed
2024-08-26 03:28:22 +0000 UTCNot sure what caused this. I rewrote those few words and deleted the original words, but not sure if it helped.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-21 02:10:20 +0000 UTCGood catch! Fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-21 02:09:55 +0000 UTCI like Kelsie, and I like how her and Rachel were made to complement each other and Kai. Excellent harem additions, makes me kinda hope they bond together with Kai. That would make a super tight mommy unit of the harem, wich makes sense actually. Looking forward to the Roland meeting in the next chapter
Jonathan Depenau
2024-07-18 16:50:29 +0000 UTCEnjoyed the chapter especially the yin yang dynamic between Kelsey & Rachel purposes. Really like Kelsey character.
The Archer
2024-07-17 23:15:57 +0000 UTCI honestly really liked this chapter a lot. It was a great read and it helped move the story forward in the ways that I was really hoping for. I already can’t wait for next chapter and want them to be longer haha. I guess that’s the downside of being up to date on the story vs. reading the whole thing at once. Kelsey was a great addition and I love how you wrote her character
Salsa and Chips
2024-07-15 17:07:35 +0000 UTCI like Kelsey, but, for me, Natalie's presence and interactions helped make this chapter much better than if she hadn't been included or it had been someone else.
Itsasecret
2024-07-15 09:11:38 +0000 UTCLol. I was also going to post something about magic working and not working on cameras 🤣
Itsasecret
2024-07-15 09:04:38 +0000 UTCYep, really like Kelsey as a character and really liked the chapter. At the start you apologized about this now being slice of life but I really enjoyed moving the plot forward and progressing the characters.
Moi465
2024-07-15 08:00:01 +0000 UTC"Needless to say it was obvious" the "was" is broken over two lines due to spacing or format or something like that.
Moi465
2024-07-15 07:44:40 +0000 UTC"Her grinned widened even more" should be "her grin widened even more"
Moi465
2024-07-15 07:13:09 +0000 UTCLove the italic "reassurance" btw. Instantly knew it would be her core.
Moi465
2024-07-15 06:47:32 +0000 UTCNo worries.
DevilDoc82
2024-07-15 06:13:33 +0000 UTCI have to manually make that adjustment, and so sometimes I don't get to it right away.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-07-15 05:49:06 +0000 UTCAlso, thanks for addressing the light magic that works on cameras vs the light magic that doesn't. I was actually going to make a post about that, but my bad week preempted that
Christopher Miller
2024-07-15 05:40:41 +0000 UTCI do like Kelsey a lot, she will fit in nicely with the other sweethearts of the harem. As a possible suggestion to keep the whole electricity/electromagnetism thing from getting confusing, how about naming the EM affinity something entirely different like Cosmos Affinity? The sort of catch all for the other energies of the universe thrown together. Magnetism, gravity, radiation, etc all in one affinity since there would be only a single, or at most a few useful effects for each different type of energy?
Christopher Miller
2024-07-15 05:38:45 +0000 UTCGreat explanation diving into the different affiniations. Also, if this is supposed to be behind the website verification, it's not
DevilDoc82
2024-07-15 05:38:37 +0000 UTC
