Naughty Friend Buys My Silence Ch. 02
Added 2020-11-04 02:39:37 +0000 UTCNovember 3, 2020
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See, that's the thing. It's obvious in her behavior, which means that it's meant for you, the reader, to pick up on it, so that you can see where this story is heading.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2022-10-04 20:22:02 +0000 UTCI can see why you've written Ryan the way you have, and I know he's young and probably a bit dumb about stuff, but it would have been good to see him picking up on the fact that clearly she's secretly at least infatuated with him, even if she doesn't fully realise it. Maybe a small bit of internal monologue or something else to have him thinking.. hang on a sec....
Duncan Gafney
2022-10-04 20:12:08 +0000 UTCI suppose I need to be more clear, and I apologize for that. I did say "Basically, if you aren't a fan of the female protagonist being a whore, you can rest assured that things only go uphill after chapter 2," and I think in a previous version it was more clear that things are worse in chapter 2, but go uphill from there, but the current note doesn't make that nearly as clear as it probably needs to be. But this chapters is the worse it gets. (Minor spoiler) (spoiler) (spoiler) There is a later chapter (much later) where she decides to take on another job, but it doesn't actually manifest into her doing anything sexual. In fact, it's actually a big turning point for their relationship (in a good way).
Author Kaizer Wolf
2021-07-31 22:56:41 +0000 UTCI'm calling bullshit on this line from chapter one "She insists she will continue being a slut, but that doesn't manifest (no cucking)" Just because it's just a blowjob and just because he's not in the room does not change the fact that she gave a man an orgasm after deciding they were going to be living together from now on. Far as I'm concerned, he's been cucked, even if their relationship is in a weird kind of grey area right now. That being said, I'm still going to continue reading, even though I feel like I've been lied to directly by the author. I half expect her to fully fuck other guys at this point and if she doesn't I'll be pleasantly surprised, but it still gives me an unpleasant taste in my mouth. If I wasn't promised no cucking this would actually bother me less to be honest, because I have read stories where a female partner fucks other guys, but it was far more equal since the guy got to fuck other girls and although I didn't like the fact that she did, it was truly equal so I felt like it was one of those things that I understood how it came about. Though it may have been one of the reasons I finished the current book and haven't went back to continue the series yet.
hawkshe .
2021-07-31 07:27:17 +0000 UTC
