Semi-Rejected Webtoon Pitch
Added 2024-02-14 21:11:14 +0000 UTCHey patrons, I like to think I come here every once in a while to throw meat (content) to a voracious pack of lions (you), but this is just
Hey patrons, I like to think I come here every once in a while to throw meat (content) to a voracious pack of lions (you), but this is just
Hey patrons,
I like to think I come here every once in a while to throw meat (content) to a voracious pack of lions (you), but this is just a fantasy I have. The reality is that it's more like I throw half of a loaf of bread (content, bad) into a pit with a sickly orphan (you) inside it. And then you look at the half loaf of bread and then up at me with big sad eyes. And I say "I will be back again in a month."
BUT
HERE'S SOMETHING FUN.
This is a pitch for a Webtoon that never really made it off the ground because the story doesn't have a clear direction. If this does come to fruition, it'll probably be pretty different from how it is now, so I feel comfortable at least sharing these character profiles with you. Please enjoy!
And just as a fun bonus, here are even earlier versions of some of these characters.
In the later version, Viktor is a NEET, but in the earlier version, Viktor is in college (and also named Vaktor). Klaus, his roommate, is "a cupid," Micah is a mimic, and Juno is a chaotic/feral lycanthrope that Vaktor has a crush on. Of course, only Viktor makes it across to the next version of the pitch in a recognizable form.
I hope you enjoyed this insight into all of the flopping about that happens behind the scenes in making comics. I'm going to get on gacha rolls now. Thank you for your patronage!
Comments
part of the feedback, i guess, is that it would benefit from being a little more plot driven, and i agree. but i'm not used to writing long plot-driven stuff, so I've been reading Webtoon dramas and taking notes.
SHEN
2024-02-29 19:55:44 +0000 UTCthe human IS a significant character but I have no drawings of her lol
Shen
2024-02-29 19:53:54 +0000 UTCThe tennis balls on the horns got me 😭 I love this cast and you better keep 'em safe if you're never gonna use them KEEP THEM SAFE, SHEN AND NEVER ABANDON THEM (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻
Limi
2024-02-15 03:16:41 +0000 UTCWait, where is the human?
Erica
2024-02-15 03:13:44 +0000 UTCSeems like the sort of thing I would get obsessed with, plot driven or slice of life style 👍
GrandpaGothCrocs
2024-02-15 02:13:45 +0000 UTCexcited for this!!!!
Hal 🔆
2024-02-15 01:51:26 +0000 UTCA Cupid design inspired by combination of Faust and Ryuk is really wild. This looks fun
Wizerl
2024-02-15 00:54:26 +0000 UTCIs the vampire hunters mother... Okay?
Catherine
2024-02-15 00:11:02 +0000 UTCI didn't know you'd like the location art! But since you do, I also just now added in the Wired Goblin Coffee Company, another exterior/interior location piece I made for this. :]
SHEN
2024-02-14 22:20:53 +0000 UTCIt's okay. We're used to being abused by how much you keep hurting lilith (she is precious) Edit: also love this idea. Hopefully you expand on it (if you're feeling it ofc)
Neminem
2024-02-14 22:13:20 +0000 UTCReally like Krakenzard
Carlos Rendon
2024-02-14 22:02:05 +0000 UTCKiwi is extremely Jo-coded. Joded, if you will. (Please don’t)
Jo!
2024-02-14 21:38:42 +0000 UTCWould, in fact, read the heck out of this
Amber Changing
2024-02-14 21:30:59 +0000 UTCThat's a bomb collar made of the strongest material in Hell! Because of an unknown crime he committed a long time ago, he is a prisoner/employee of Beelzebub and is normally imprisoned in Hell.
SHEN
2024-02-14 21:23:12 +0000 UTCYou're not the first to say that! People seem to immediately love Angel in Training and Cupid. :] I guess it's Viktor I need to sell them on though.
SHEN
2024-02-14 21:18:35 +0000 UTCI want to know why Cupid has a tracking device.
jealoussin
2024-02-14 21:18:22 +0000 UTCAngel-in-training is my favorite, what a sweetie
Jen V
2024-02-14 21:16:35 +0000 UTC
