AnK Chapter 6: A whole lotta pages
Added 2022-09-20 21:23:18 +0000 UTCI had to redo some of the pages from the previous upload because I don't think the dialogue made sense for Deleon's train of thought.
This group of pages took a while to make because of the dialogue, if I'm being honest. I was going back and forth for days on what Deleon should say and why. And I'll probably end up changing it again in the future, because I'm constantly scrutinising my work from beginning to end.
Google docs archive of entire comic: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1uP1DVLUkun7EZi7y5Ippl5X3kAM2SKgT?usp=sharing
Comments
Deleon is trapped in more ways than one. I am curious what Calloway will think of this outburst. There are too many avenues I can see him taking.
2022-10-31 13:05:01 +0000 UTCI’m back reading a bit so this is late, but that “there is no freedom” panel is just so powerful and it sticks in my brain
Emily Rose
2022-10-12 22:11:28 +0000 UTCI really enjoy how powerful Deleon's reaction feels as a reader. It's a normal reaction, but after chapters of them being somber and confused (because they're a doll), it just hits really hard. Like "o'shit. Things are getting reeeeaaal" *Cheif Kiss*
2022-09-27 13:49:05 +0000 UTCI quite like the dialogue in this scene, I thought it was really clear, easy to follow and explained how Deleon has been feeling up til now.
2022-09-22 22:07:39 +0000 UTCI like the new dialogue! It's a bit wordier, but it explains Deleon's thought process really well :) Good to see him stand up for himself.
2022-09-21 07:45:43 +0000 UTCDeleon handles a agument better than I do after only two to three weeks of being alive Again, I think Calloway didn't thought about how is "chevalry" would be remember *gets a spray bottle* Bad Walky, Bad. *proceed to spray the man
2022-09-21 05:20:09 +0000 UTCWalker either is going to yell back or get some respect for Deleon
Charlie Faye
2022-09-21 03:22:41 +0000 UTCYES GET ANGRY SCREAM KILL
2022-09-21 03:13:06 +0000 UTCGettem deleon
Abeille Femelle
2022-09-20 23:47:50 +0000 UTC
