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I thought I should have a montage to show time passing.  I don't know if I should try to add as much dialog as possible, or leave it silent.

Some of these are open to change.

One option for the missing panels I've considered is making two that are related.  I'd move everything else up, and have the two bottom panels connected.  One panel shows all three on a giant water-slide.  The next panel shows them at the bottom and Annie has lost her top.  ... just something I'm considering.  Any suggestions welcome.

What happens on the next page is they end up at the comic shop Annie visits.  They'll all end up getting dressed up by Jesse.

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