FFD 73 Pre Beta
Added 2024-03-09 19:22:25 +0000 UTCHey guys. Sorry for being late on this one. This chapter fought me tooth and nail after the first scene. It was hard trying to make it flow the way I wanted and I'm honestly still not to happy with it, but it is as good as it's going to get for now at least.
And that's not getting into all the other nonsense I've had to deal with in RL recently.
And yes, this chapter WILL be dedicated to the GOAT from Japan Toriyama. DBZ was my gateway drug into anime when I was 5 watching saturday morning cartoons. At the risk of sounding like an old shit, back then the only cartoons we had at the time were the classic shorts, and long drawn out marvel stories that took FOREVER to understand what was going on. DBZ was like an epiphany to 5 year old me: easy enough to understand, but long enough to know that there was MORE and it was interesting.
Anyways, I'm planning to request a new art commission soon, but I'm looking for a new artist for this one. Think WWE style. Epic and manly, but also blatantly stupid. If anyone has any recs to send my way, please do so.
Again, thanks for being patient with me everyone. Hope this chapter scratches the itch.
Comments
Cool chapter, but I’m also really looking forward to you wrapping up FFD. Feel like it’s… not necessarily dragging on too long, but I feel like the right time to end has come. Hopefully will allow you to focus on GAIWP, TTRT and Family lore as well.
Cainthedream
2024-03-14 13:54:07 +0000 UTCShirou is literally the embodiment of no good deeds go unpunished but it's him so all is well and good under this earth.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2024-03-12 01:33:02 +0000 UTCAnd we all laugh as the merciless god known as the writer punishes our character. Seriously love that you never coddle your characters always makes the story more interesting.
Zachary Rothschild
2024-03-11 03:44:27 +0000 UTCThings are waking up and paying attention to Shirou! With every problem solved another two pop up!
Grant Daniel
2024-03-10 22:39:22 +0000 UTCPoor Shirou, always the doggo. Then again he’s still best boi. Most of the time. Also that ending….do the plots ever cease?!
Tyric Gaias
2024-03-09 20:03:10 +0000 UTC
