TTRT 46 Pre Beta
Added 2023-11-29 01:43:57 +0000 UTCWoo! A full chapter of TTRT!! It's an almost Christmas miracle!!
Not much to say here. I spent a good part of my vacation time when I wasn't with family getting this up to snuff. It was almost half this length for a while before I got my second wind and some inspiration to stretch things out and make this chapter full of plot and awesome and proper old fashioned Third Fang Bullshit!
Anyways, to everyone in the United states, happy thanksgiving. To everyone outside, happy... almost Christmas time! Or any other holiday around now that you celebrate that I don't know about Here's to me hopefully getting something out before saint nick comes around!
Anyways, gotta get prepped up for work tomorrow. Oh boy this is gonna be... fun. Fun's a word.
Comments
I've re-read this story probably 4 or 5 times at this point. Its hands down the best naruto fic I've read. I've been dying for an update so when I saw this post i said i have to. The way you have Naruto handle the original Sasuke, while having the new one around watching and learning was amazing plus having him be mature enough to admit he cant go home chefs kiss. I seriously hope its not another year before an update but by god i was on the edge of my seat for this whole chapter
Justice
2023-12-04 08:28:04 +0000 UTCAh crap , I almost forgot . ( Damn need to have a chech-up on my head sometime ) The fight between Sasuke and Naruto was so cool and impressive even if it's in the mindscape . I love how Naruto seemed to not care about the attack and seemed be able to tank the sword at bare hand . It reminded about a clear contrast between the protagonist who is on the beginning of the journey and the Vilain overpowered except that it is the contrary he is overpowered protagonist who is at the beginning of his journey and Traitor Sasuke was the vilain at his journey . I'm also impressed about the jutsu show by the Original Sasuke and since he will be absorbed . Does that mean his power will be too alongside the skill that he developped .
Eaglestorm27
2023-12-01 14:58:57 +0000 UTCAnd here I was worried that you would complete write off the original Sasuke. My apologies. I love how you explained his cannon freakout. Please get plenty of rest and keep up the good work.
Drake
2023-11-30 03:16:10 +0000 UTCOHAHAHAHAHAHAHA It's Alive IT'S ALIVE HAHAHAHAHA (Laugh that lasted a day . ) Ok time to be serious . I will say Bravo . You managed to surprise me once again especially the different events that will accumulate on the Elemental Nations . Let's start with the first problem that will get active in a few month . I dared to say to see Temujin and the other from outside of Elemental Nations add quite some spices even if we knew that they will pose not a threat to Naruto but then hey THey waited years before coming to the Elemental Nations so that means they have accumulated enough power to start a real invasion worth of a civilisation . A question beg to ask . Since in Naruto the Last and it was constantly hammered in your fic that the Elemental Nation are BIG LIKE REALLY BIG literally worth of a few thousands km if we take into account novels that show that shinobi could run faster than a train ( apparently yes) and the large numerous biome that are found . You cannot put that in a quote unquote meager island and not even Japan will be close to that so how big it is ? How big the World is really or more importantly what kind of other civilisation is lurking outside of it . Then , we have to take into account that what kind of power is developped outside the plotbox . I'm curious on that part . Actually since those guys apparently conquer other nations as well does that mean their manpower will be higher than before . Their technology seemed to be slightly in advantage since they have a much larger industrial base they could pose a serious challenge to the Elemental Nations especially for the normal mooks and the lower superhuman tier . Now for the Sky Village , i hope it will be worth it since they have to shown a higher set of force projection to be a problem as a start . I mean i get it they have large flying fortress that have laser that could pierce a fucking mountain but hey if they have seen the fight at Iwa . It is useless since they saw shinobis that have destroyed a few dozens of them in a single go . It wouldn't be surprising they will use the wait game and took more in R&D technology development to find other way to power their forces like i dunno flying battleships ( Yep that's a scary thought for the low level shinobi ) . Hell maybe , it will be an eye opener for those idiots in the Elemental nations that Technology need to be put in the booster mode research time . I guess that land of Snow will play a important role on that . So Kabuto will try to have an Uzumaki as an student . Interesting development . Oh and we must not forget that there is the other threat that is coming nicely : Tobi and perhaps the rest of the criminal underworld who will certainly learn Presence and maybe developped it akin to different variant . Danzo that is trying to put a lot of people into a genjutsu and perhaps enthralled other smaller countries to have them on a war footing . Hell , he could perhaps teached the Presence . Both of those last threat will certainly created more pressure on the Ookagiri and the trainee to disclose the secret behind Presence . But hey , i have the feeling that Naruto will certainly wanted to accelerate the firestorm so instead of giving them Presence complete version maybe he could manipulate the information and forced other type of development such as a equivalent of a Haki-type (OP) or a Domain-type (JJK) . I can definetly see that type of development that will touch the Elemental Nations . Oh and we are still going to see the otherworldly threat that are shown both from the fuckfest that is Ghost and the Shitstorm that is Naruto ( Toneri , A monster hiding in the sea and the Otsutsuki ) . Most of the people here want to Have Naruto to be healed quickly but you know what . I want to see the other presence user to shine I want to have them fight and show Naruto that he could trust them to deal with them . I want to have the Rookie 11 and the other jonin trained in the Family way to show their glory . Anyway it's good to be back and i'm waiting and impatient to see the cataclysm that will result from it .
Eaglestorm27
2023-11-29 11:07:25 +0000 UTCOhhhhh it’s gooood to be back. The lights! The camera! The chaos! Crypt being crypt! Also sasuke and naruto having a semi productive conversation about how absolutely messed up their canon relationship is! Nothing in here is a disappointment! Thank you Third Fang this has absolutely made my week.
Grant Daniel
2023-11-29 08:37:46 +0000 UTCOh yeah, aside from more technologically advanced Steam punk Shinobi nation hiding an even more eldritch abomination than Moryo and reaching somewhat on an even field with the Bijuu, a fucking wannabe ruler in search of mysterious stones that can grant him immortal life that come from which honestly so out of style at this point. When will have our own Nadeshiko Village arc TF ? We still need to finish the Shizuka plotline.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2023-11-29 07:51:04 +0000 UTCNo it's Shion. She is the one without the chain link but still remember the previous timeline bc of her unique dojutsu. It is definitely referenced her not Hinata.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2023-11-29 07:43:06 +0000 UTCAlso, just remembered from a little sneak peak before we had TTRT and we were still on the first part. Someone who's not supposed to have the memory back does and from the comment. I think it's Hinata. I think he's secretly remembers. Personally hope basic resolve soon. They're great together I wanna see more of the
Zachary Rothschild
2023-11-29 07:39:39 +0000 UTCIt's a case of if you blink you will miss it. Another continent is referenced in this chapter through Haido (referencing the old ass as fuck Naruto the Movie: Legend of the Stone of Gelel). Things will go mad for quite a time before Naruto flexes his Bijuu Sage Mode to tell all of the idiots to STFU once he fully recovers ofc.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2023-11-29 07:33:41 +0000 UTCA new Uzumaki, the sky village, 0 tails ans Sasuke going nut. You came out swinging. Glad you're back looks good. Still waiting to see how nadeshiko village ends. Stay safe and don't overload yourself.
Zachary Rothschild
2023-11-29 06:59:31 +0000 UTCHaido is about to get rekted bc of power creeps has moved pass Mcguffin objects of power, it has moved to Giant monsters of powers now. Shinno is a little better, much more self-aware. The chances that his invasion against Konoha is very likely but he is willing to sit down, take in whatever he can regarding the situation. He is going to fail regardless, not bc the the Zero-tails doesn't measure up but bc Naruto is going to put him in the dirt even without the Bijuu like he has done to every other dozens of assholes with similar ambitions before.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2023-11-29 06:53:19 +0000 UTCTF, Has Naruto done the Shippuden movie Bonds mission before in the previous timeline ? If not, meh, Kabuto is in the process to fuck over Shiino either way. The girl apprentice is an Uzumaki is unexpected and very likely will be used by that that asshole as a bargaining chip against Naruto I can see it already.
Bùi Văn Tuấn Lâm
2023-11-29 06:09:15 +0000 UTC
